aww this is pretty

Wow, that was absolutely beautiful. Just beautiful. Thank you for this.

That was unbelievably amazing!! I had tears in my eyes towars the end!! Great Job! I loved it!!

This is beautiful... a deft mix of humour, sadness and a talent for description!

A short and sweet piece that left tears in my eyes. The character Tanglinna reminds me of a teacher I once had. Just thought to mention it even though it really has nothing to do with the story.

Wow...your story made me wish that I could see the Master Archer's pictures, and the Master himself. Very well done. :)

I wonder what creature Legolas would have drawn Tanglinna as? Hm...I will need to thing about that.
I loved it...you mixed everyone's different charactrs and plots perfectly. And sadly. So sadly...
I love the idea of Tanglinna leaving Legolas the box. It is so sad, and it sounds like something that he would do.
The last line would have to be my favourite, I actually laughed.
Sunni

I came across this entirely by chance and do not know if you still read your reviewes. But if you do, I just wanted to say that this is a lovely story. Brief as it is, it has so much depth! And I love the notion of using pictures to capture people's personalities. Thank you for sharing this.

Wow. This was, and still is, a breathtaking story! I almost cried along with Legolas, and the way Tanglinna choose to represent Legolas and others. Very touching. Keep on writing stories, you have the gift.

This story is beautifully done.

It is always nice to see that someone who appears one way to the world has a hidden side that is so opposed to what everyone else thinks.

Your decriptions of the drawings was so well done that I could easily visualize each one. I loved Legolas's appreciation of them and his tender remembrance of the Master Archer. I also think it is great that he could recognize himself and others in the pictures.

Excellent piece.

May I ask when you are going to update TWW?

Yes, it is nice to know that Tanglinna had another side to him. A nice little story, and the symbolic images are quite effective.

*sob* That's so sweet! I had to keep reassuring myself that Tanglinna is really alive...

God bless!

Wow! Gorgeous, beautiful! You are a wonderful author, this is the 2nd story of yours I've read, and I absolutely love them! You really are a good writer. Consider writing stuff and sending them to different magazines, if you haven't already!

Beautiful. Simply beautiful. I have lurked for a long time, and the tales of the Tricksy trio are definatly among my favorites!
I always knew Tanglinna had a soft side, it came out in the Jade King for a second, but here it is in its entirity!
How could you kil Brethil? *is still crying* Poor Brethil, he was too sweet to die!
Thank you for such a beautiful piece of writing.

Oh how sweet! I always liked Tanginna in the stories he appears in! This is a wonderfull fan fiction about his lesser seen side! So cool!