I COULD say that I knew it.

I could say it.

As I said...I *could* say that I knew it.
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Okay, I KNEW IT!
There, I had to get this out of my system. She's Sirius' sister. Hahaha, I knew it.
Okay, okay, I'm calming down already.
I don't want to say that you've been obvious, I'm just so happy that for once I was right with my suspicion. Normally I'm awfully bad at those things. When I watch a crime fiction movie, I always suspect the wrong people because I never get the hints, but now for once I actually figured something out. YAY!
But back to your chapter...
I was kinda surprised by the sudden shift towards the end of third year. Haven't we been in second (?) at the end of last chapter? Can't recall right now, have to read it again.
But what would interest me now is whether all those chapters until now are only some kind of prologue to what happens next or not. Because if they aren't, I kinda miss something happening in between. I know that it's awfully boring to write normal school days sometimes, but I get the feeling that you're jumping a little too fast from one point to another...if this isn't just 'summarizing everything that is necessary to know if you want to understand the further story'.
I hope you get my meaning, right now I'm feeling as if I'm writing crap here. If not, send me an email, then I try to find better words for it. *g*
I put you on my fav-list, hope this helps at least a little so that others find your stories. Even if they don't like that one, Time Toss is worth a read in my opinion (even though I normally don't like crossovers, but you already knew that.).
On the other hand - it's kinda nice having my own private review board here...
Well, right now I start babbling crap, so I'll finish now.
Keep on with this story, I want to know where this leads to. I mean, you already said that there would be sequels...
Btw, you didn't mention what Evadne's animagus form was, did you? Gosh, I really have to re-read this. I'll do now.
Bye

FairyTale

First of all:
I really don't understand why nobody reviews this story, because I think it promises to become good. At least it has potential.
And I don't say that because we keep mailing each other or something like this. I really mean it. If Evadne doesn't turn into a Mary Sue (which I don't think) and there is an interesting plot (which I think, if you've already planned so many sequels *g*), then I don't see any reason why it shouldn't become good.
Well, then I'll just leave a little longer review, how about that?
Re-reading the first chapter, a question came to my mind:
Why does McGonagall call Evadne 'Reija'? Is there any meaning behind this? I'm curious.
Well, after reading chapter 2 I have some suspicions as to why Evadne knows the Marauders and Lily though she is six years younger. Let me just babble them out, okay?
When Orion is first mentioned, my first thought was that he's Sirius' brother. It appears to be some kind of 'fanfiction-writers-code' to call him like that, and I think the idea is good concidering that it's another star constellation that can be used as a name.
So, let's just assume that your Orion also is Sirius' brother.
Evadne says that he's her brother, which would make her Sirius' sister! Ha, am I good or what?
But who the heck is Ariadne?
And why does Remus ask Evadne if she knows about Sirius? If she really is his sister (which would explain her friendship with the Marauders and Lily by the way), then surely she knows. Or did she isolate herself that much in Greece? And what does Remus suspect Evadne knows? Hmmmm, I have to admit, I'm rather curious about it.
Don't let the lack of reviews get you down, keep this up. I want to read it!
And I know the lack of reviews from 'No Longer Safe'. I think the only reason why people read and reviewed The Last Marauder was that I declared in the summary that either Remus or Sirius would have to die, and they all wanted to find out whom it was.
What world is this in which you have to kill somebody to get a decent review...*g* only kidding, of course.
wow, that was pretty long, wasn't it? How often do you plan to update this?
Well, I guess I'll get to know.
I'm going into my bed now. It's still freezing cold here in Germany!
I'll write you an email as soon as this week's university stress is over, probably on Thursday but Sunday latest. Until then!
Bye,
Laura ;-)

I'm the first reviewer! YAY! Hopefully not the last.
This makes me want to read more, I have to admit. Though there is one thing I don't quite understand:
If Evadne was in her first year when Snape was in his seventh, then she has to be six years younger than the Marauders. How come she knows James and Lily so good, then? Or did I misunderstand something?
And, if you say you will change the books a little, will there be some - erm - early Sirius entrance maybe? Just asking because I'm somewhat addicted to a certain convict. Not to forget his werewolf friend...
Anyway, hope you update soon. Let me know when it's the case!