Wow, this was such a good story, and I really mean that. The weird thing is, that I sort of lost track of this story at some point (like months ago), and then I went on my own lappy and opened firefox. It turns out firefox closed 'unexpectedly' which means it saved all my tabs, and I FOUND YOUR STORY AGAIN!! I was so happy, I read 20 chapters in two days (need... sleep... x_x).

I don't usually review for stories because I only read ones that are finished, and by then it's hard to tell the author to update or critique their work AFTER they finished it. I just felt compelled to review this one because it was complex, happy, angsty, suspensful, and it even had a great ending! I'll have to nose around your authors page sometime ^ - ~

Till then,

- Me

So I waited until I got to the end of the story before I wrote this review because I wanted to make it memorable.

I love this idea and it really made me look at my fan fictions that I didn't think were good enough and just took up room on my computer, really look at them and realize that I could post them and see what people think. Do you think that you could read over some of them and tell me what you think?

Please keep writing and you will probably see more reviews from me!

Don't you think umm... Inuyasha would look to much like Hotohori in black with his hair in a bun 'cause ... umm...er..OK, maybe not that much but I just can't imagine Inuyasha with his hair in a bun.

keep up the good wok

OMGOSH! Such a great story! I am in love with it XD you are such a great writer and your story was amazing! I look forward to reading more from you =)

Wow! I loved this first chapter! Its very interesting! I cant wait 2 read the next one~

So basically she got retconned.

this is a really good story and hopefully i will be able to finish. soon. real soon.

This chapter made me cry! It was so sad but it was SO GOOD!

I just have one question... so they will be re born and they will have there old memerize and they will go back to eachother?(sorry bad speller =/)

wow i really love your wrighting =) i was haven sorta a bad day but this made me laugh and in the biggining chapters they made me cry... with ANYTHING I DONT CRY this is the first and i was shocked but i think your like the best wrighter in the world and u inspired me to wright! well im new to fanfiction and i signed up to do this too and i dont know like where do u wright the stories and like how do u submit them? anywho your a really good wrighter and i liked the other storie 2 (two weeks) and there un expecting turns =P (sorry im not a good speler so sorry is i spelled anything wrong on hear)

OMG! this was the best anime/manga/fanfiction i have ever read
you did such a good job on this story. i mean i just sared reading it like 2 nights ago-it was a 37 pages-it broke my heart when i had to stop reading. i finally finished though and i think its terrific it should be a movie! i mean its like a heart-pounding story. i love it i love it i love it. im so happy i read it all. i mean right now its 2:02 and i start at page 30 when i got home and just finished it. i just want to say cograts on such a great story.=D BSlove

I love happy endings!

this was a really really good story!
i have not read a story that had such an inyeresting story line as yours! thanks so much...it was great

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