  aneyeis-uponu 11/29/08 . chapter 1 this store is great cant wait to see what happens |
 CheetoFlavoredLove 2/20/08 . chapter 3To those who hated it go bump a stup! I really enjoy'd it please keep writing! |
| Lily-James14 1/28/05 . chapter 3 Are you kidding? Its incredible! I love it! Please keep writing...im anxious to know what happens next! |
| tracykingdom 7/19/04 . chapter 1 Hey this is a great story fuck the others who hated it. You should write more please! |
| Dr. Huff-Puff 2/14/04 . chapter 3 Well, I must say: YOU'RE WRONG! IT IS VERY GOOD! AND I LIKE IT!
So, you better write more, or I'll have to fly all the way from Armenia, and find where you live (Don't ask how, cuz I don't know either), and I'll make you sit in front of the pc and write the rest of this story. *winks*
I know that it's been 3 years since you last updated it, but Huff-Puff! Post a new chapter! |
| Lost-Lil-Gurl 7/24/03 . chapter 3 Cut yourself some slack, I love the story! _ And it's so sweet how Chas is also protective of Liz. I "aww"ed when he caught her after she was tripped by that girl. _ Mean lil hooch! Er, sorry, X.x; That's just a habit I have, calling everyone a hooch. Well, continue on with the story! _ |
| Lost-Lil-Gurl 7/24/03 . chapter 2 "Oh, and I'll have to tell them you're my cousin, staying with us for a while, so that's the story, okay, Liz?" - David
Actually, if you think about it, they are kind of cousins. Virginia's mother was Wendell's step-mother right? So, wouldn't Virginia & Wendell be step brother & sister? Just a thought. |
| Katrina 3/9/02 . chapter 1 If anyone flames this I'll hunt them down! This is sooo good, please can i have it on my web page www.geocities.com/the_10k/10k.html ? Please e mail me the story if you want it on my web page. I would be so grateful!
from the_10k! |
| mandy 1/14/02 . chapter 9 oh come on you GOTTA write more, and FAST! im hooked on the story! |
| Ikoilla the Admirer 1/13/02 . chapter 9 Cool! I couldn't have done better! |
| Ellie4 1/4/02 . chapter 9 Very good! But I did get quite confused on parts like aren't David and Peter the same person and you just changed his name or something or am I just totally missing something! (Which is totally possible, I seem to miss a lot of things!) But other then that little thing, very good! Pravo! Now I need another chapter though, (I'm not trying to sound demanding, I just want to know what happens next!) |
| me princess me 1/2/02 . chapter 9 thats great plz finish it i luv how u rmakin liz have mean people in her life |
| butterflysroses far too lazy to sign in 11/19/01 . chapter 9 OMG! THIS IS SUCH A CUTE STORY! finish it... pretty pretty please? i'll even beta read it if you want... honest! |
| bookwormgirl 5/10/01 . chapter 1 cool |
| Lisbethcloudaol.com 5/9/01 . chapter 1 This is a great story! Please write more soon. Can't Wait! |
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