WOW! Awesome story! So much depth and details.
I'm missing only the digimons in the story, but that is all.

I have one question that was in my head during the entire time I was reading it:

Why are you still writing fan fiction and spending so much time with it. You have the potential to write a good fiction and get publish. Just don't publish it on Send something to some publisher or to a magazine.

I believe you can do it! That is why you are on my favorite author's list!

I love your stories they are so awesome, i've read this story over 10 times, >< it's so awesome that it doesn't get boring even after then 10th time :P

I have never, ever, ever, ever, ever read a fanfic as good as that one. You have put everything into it, and stuck with it the whole way through. I can't believe that it's that long, but I love it. I plan to read the sequel(A Mother's Love) and possibly ^_^! write a sequel to that? If that's alright with oyu. I haven't posted anything on but am currently working on an M rated fanfic for mature themes. I can write easily at K+ rating and write childrens books easily. I am good at writing and am also writing a novel. If you want, I can send what I've done so far on my M rated Takari fanfic, just give me an address. I'd love to be able to write like you someday. Writing is my life as I find things easier to express on paper than in words. You shouldn't have to worry about any spelling or grammatical errors in my work: I take pride in what I write. If it is okay with you, I will begin a fanfic following on from your story, including about the disclaimer that the characters you made are not mine and the original Digimon characters are not mine either. The only characters that would be mine are the ones I make, and I tend not to create new characters anyway. It makes it too complicated, especially when there are already characters that don't actually exist! Please get back to me so I know whether it's okay or not. I can send the story chapter by chapter, and if you don't like it, let me know. Constructive criticism always helps. I look forward to working with you shortly. I am fourteen, in case you wanted to know. By the way, if your really busy, I'll try to take it slow and make things a lot easier for you so you don't have to do a lot. I'll be waiting!

Please let me add to your awesome story. It would mean a lot to me and help me improve my writing.

Sincerely, digitalmonster911

P.S. When I'm writing, I'm definetly not as formal! I guess it's just the intelligent genes I use when it comes to formal writing for an essay or something!

This is really good, some parts made me think of the song "Don't cry" by Seal, Still it was really good good job

Lol this is so good, I haven't finished reading the whole thing but so far it rocks good job. Lol i love the random parts
“That’s what I want to know,” our brothers said, in unison. Then they looked at each other all weird, and then shrugged.
Lol that part was brilliant

It's been a beautifull story. tears actually came to my eyes at some parts. Well all the story actually. Keep up the good work

it's horribel! i hate it! but great song and endding

I LOVE HARRY POTTER! You know what I find wierd is that when I first started reading the books, I always pronounced Hermione's name as the way it should be. H/Hr all the way Baby! I like the story.

hahahahaha I am ba-ack! I didn't abandon you! PS: I was formerly TheAngelofLove - Kuroi. Sorry I didn't read it earlier...I left fanfiction for however long after becoming anorexic and all...anyway I am better and after gaining my sense of life back have come back to a place I love ! Haha I'm off to finish reading dis wundaful ficcie.

I like that whole ring thing...I might just go and pay a visit to my local celtic shop tomorrow and have a poke around...

Wow, young engagement age...they're so in love...*goes starry eyed* anywayz, I'm off to read the next part

hahahahahaha...slightly dirty chapter there wasn't it? jk, just as fab as they always are

Wow a baby at 18...scary. Somehow I don't think TK and Kari would really be married and with a baby at 18 but then again the whole fic and getting together again in their 30's wouldn't work if they weren't that young would it? Heh, I'll play along!! It's sweet anyway.

Cute!! I don't know what else to say really...I like the 'book' better than the interludes though I must admit

Little Hope is going to come along...yayz nice chap I'm off to read the next one