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| mellombror 2007-11-27 ch 32, | abusefinally, im finished reading your story, and i have tos ay it was an awsome story, actions here and there but just an little idea...if you are going to get alan and ellie to breakup is it maybe possible to get them togheter after that? just thinking loud. and maybe you could make that they are togheter at the island, when the storm hits and well lets say, rewrite that it is not like the movie, just and idea, but GREAT story! all hail yvonne |
| mellombror 2007-11-27 ch 30, | abusei have been reading your story up to now and i must say this chapter made me laugh, hehe it was pretty funny when greg called and when alan shouted at the old man, a laughed pretty hard then an im soon finished with your story, it is WERY GOOD! |
| Larien Ancalimon 2007-02-20 ch 32, | abuseBrilliant! Sorry I didn't review every chapter, but I didn't really think there'd be much point in me leaving thirty two reviews. =) This fic is by far one of the best Jurassic Park stories around, and its an added bonus that I really love Alan and Ellie together. There's nothing bad I can say about this fic, to be honest. Its just plain damn great! |
| Kate 2006-05-18 ch 32, anon. | abuseHI there, I've just finnished reading your story, it was brilliant!! Please write more especially about what happened after Jurrasic park 1. Many Thanx Kate |
| Silent Cobra 2006-03-27 ch 32, | abuseThis was a FAN-BLOODY-TASTIC story. Absolutely amazing, drop dead wonderful. I never read stories this long that are already finished, and I sat down and did it. I love it. A-FRAKKING-MAZING. Simply stupendous. I'm running out of cool words like that. |
| Acacia Jules 2005-07-07 ch 4, | abuseJust for reference, Jurassic Park took place in 1989, August of 1989, to be exact. |
| Goslin 2004-09-17 ch 1, | abuseYvonne, you are truely an inspiration to all writers, even if they're not head over heels over the relationship between alan and ellie. You got skills, girl! I've been converted. I always thought that it was a litte 'wrong' for ellie to be dating her teacher. I think the whole world makes more since after reading this fic. I was thinking about writing an allan/ellie fic myself...but I don't know! I might just shame your wonderful fic by being in the same genre. (If you'd be interested in checking out my 'skills', or lack there of, I'd be honored if you'd read The Many Adventures Of Carmen And Sandiego. It doesn't cling to the tv series at all, and can be understood by anyone. Thanks so much, Goslin |
| treekicker 2004-08-25 ch 32, | abuseWow, this is really good! I wished it would keep going to the plane and maybe even till around the park. I'd love to hear Grant's POV when Ian keeps staring at Ellie. Haha |
| texasraptor 2004-06-20 ch 1, | abuseYvonne, I can't tell you how much I've enjoyed "Alan and Ellie." I'm a relative newcomer to the world of Jurassic Park fanfiction and while I like the "back to the island" stories, what I really wanted was a good character driven story featuring my two favorite "people" from the JP series. Well, when I saw the title to this one, I couldn't press the enter button fast enough. I hope you know it's kept me up late the last few nights reading it. :-) Alan and Ellie come across as full three dimensional people, but what really makes the story go are the wonderful secondary characters you've created. You've obviously spent a long time developing them, and it shows. Rob is truly adorable. On to New Beginnings! |
| eteria 2004-06-14 ch 32, | abuseThank you for this well written and sweet story! |
| Shadow131 2004-05-26 ch 21, | abuse*cracks up laughing* good! I'm not the only one who thinks he looks like Indiana Jones some times! |
| Shadow131 2004-05-24 ch 11, | abuse*starts crying*Darn it! I love fluff...It's too cute... |
| Shadow131 2004-05-24 ch 1, | abuseAww...That's sweet! ^^ I like your style of writing. It's very clever. |
| raptorcardfreak 2004-02-10 ch 32, anon. | abuse*claps* that was a great story! It took me two weeks to read it, but it was very well written- probably the best I've ever read. Now, I'll have to start reading your other ones! |
| Swamp Bear 2003-12-10 ch 32, | abuseOne word, Excellent. |