Interesting development.

Ah, yes, the plot thickens. But is it truly over? I hope you can continue soon.

Ack!!!! A cliffhanger- how dare you! LOL. I've been reading this on your site but figured I should drop by to tell you I liked it.

~Showna

this was a great story!!! it feels weird that this story got as few reviews as it did...but then i realized that everyone probably did what i did...which was read the story at your own site! but anyway i LOVE this story and i can't wait till the next part ocmes out!!!!

Even though I already read this story on your website I felt like I should put in a review on ff.net. This entire story was great to read. Their was a bunch of twist and turns and I like how you ended it because it leaves a opening for another story.

No I do not appreciate cliffhangers. Gomen. I thought I reviewed tis already. *shrugs* Anyways, yeah this Kyoko-chan if you didn't know. See ya 'round.

P.S. If you had writer's block you should have said so! I would have been glad to help, if I could.

Kit: Hypocrite. You need to work your own Digimon fic. Excuse me fics. Didn't anyone ever tell you not to do so many stories at the same time. Especially when you cross different animes! You went from Digimon to Inuyasha to freakin' X/Men for crying ou tloud!

Ja Ben!

awesome story!very good cliffhanger as well. Err...ja ne is goodbye in japanese right? Ah, oh well. Keep up the great work!

Great story overrall. I already read all of the chapters for this story on your site. Hope to see new chapters for this story soon. For ff.net and your site.

How many good things can I describe about this story Ben?! I've been reading it on your site and it is getting REALLY GOOD! Keep it up and tell your sis to keeping writing. She's good. ^_^

Very...um...interesting.