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Andrew Joshua Talon
2007-12-31 . chapter 1
LOL, figures McDonalds would survive the gate explosion. Nicely done. Short, but nicely done.
PooglesBiggestFan
2006-06-04 . chapter 1
Something that hasn't changed for Faye, McDonalds is still around! That's hilarious! I can see Faye complaning over the less-than-perfect food, while Spike would just be happy for something that can be called 'beef'!
Moreta Lynx
2005-11-29 . chapter 1
Hey just 'What' is so wrong with McDonalds?!?!?!?
*Crosses arms over the McDonalds insignia on her crew trainer shirt*
^_^ funny I liked it (besides the McBashing, but I can just mantally replace McDonalds with Burger King. then he woulda been paying twice as much for worse food and waited 5 years for the food.)
B.T.W. I've just finished "Prelude" I really love it, waiting for the next chapter is driving me nuts, but I really had no idea what to say about it in a review. mostly that it's very imaginitive, and so far it seems to fit what we know of both charecters perfectly, y Doohan gave Spike the Swordfish, how Vicious got to be that freakin' awsome, I'm looking forward to the events leading up to that last hit Where Spike get's his butt shot off and Julia takes care of him.

Aneyways this story made me laugh, thanks.
tik0
2005-01-14 . chapter 1
Short, sweet, and completely hilarious.

I loved it.

~bored2death
AGx-07
2004-10-29 . chapter 1
wow. That was really short..but funny and therefor good. I liked it.
Writin'Chica2K
2004-02-26 . chapter 1
Oh, the irony! Specially since I consider MickeyD's the evil empire as well. ^-^ I love it!
Saiyajin-Neko
2002-11-19 . chapter 1
real good i love the end espcialy the fact that im hooked on mc Donalds i cant stop lauging.Keep going i want to know what happens when they eat it.
Monoshiri
2002-11-17 . chapter 1
Yay! This was cute. Funny, my friends and I were having much the same conversation the other day, and my sister's responses were pretty much verbatim what Ed said...
P.S.-Also just read Chpt 4 of Prelude...it just keeps gettin' better and better! Pleeze keep writing it! ^-^
Lady Razorsharp
2002-11-11 . chapter 1
*laughs* This is great! And it's nice to know some things never change.
Gundam Pilot Washu-chan
2002-11-10 . chapter 1
short and sweet. just the thing I was lookin' for
jeff
2002-11-10 . chapter 1
hahahahaha its funny real funny
Kookie
2002-11-10 . chapter 1
ROTFLMAO!!! Now I know why Spike and Faye hate Earth. McDonald's is nasty.
Blooknaburg
2002-11-08 . chapter 1
Hehe! LOL MCDONALDS!!!!
*pounds fist on desk* McDonald's!
Cool!

See you soon!
skidlebop
2002-11-08 . chapter 1
Oh dear lord no... they wouldn't stoop that low... how dare you! LOL ^_^
Jcool
2002-11-08 . chapter 1
HAHAHA, that was funny, making the crappy food Mcdonalds. Thanks, you made me laugh in a way i haven't in a while.
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