Your chapters are too short. And I expected better from you after reading the e-mail you sent Caity a long time ago about her and Mat. lol. You are a good author though and I like your work very much.

Please update soon!

kool story waiting for the next chapter

You should try not to let people's opinion's get to you so much. There are those who will do nothing but ** and moan about what you write, no matter how good it is. THOSE are the people who don't have the GUTS to do what you're doing right now; posting your story online and letting the world see.

And if it gets you down and you don't feel like writing, don't post. It's YOUR story and you can do WHATEVER you want with it.

To hell with the rest of them.

Keep up the GREAT work! Looking forward to seeing this updated more fully.

waiting for the next Chapter...i like the wor so far

I love this story. More! More! Please Continue!

i dont think its crap, i kinda like it.

Yah, Let me help u out. It's not all that realistic to me.

how would Reese know her name and not #.

It's Dinah- not Dina.

Wat ep r u up to cuz u say she didn't admitt she was a meta human and she did in ep 1.03 "Prey For The Hunter" but y would he have the bat-ring and she didn't didn't give him dat until ep 1.05 "Sins Of A Mother",

fix these problems and I'm sure there r more corrections but i didn't feeling like going on after chapter 3.

Oh yea, I don't think Helena would have told Reese about her mom and dad, lessly would he b shocked about cuz he doesn't know about them. ecept that morton told him about Batman but not much.

YEP dat is all

This is great! What happens next? Please post soon.

great! It was really sweet, glad to see a H/R shipper finally updated!

Great Story! I really like it. Very interesting. Any chance of longer chapters? update soon!

ahh, no! cliffhanger! my worst nightmare. hey, you can make the nightmare end if you write more. hint, hint.
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How could Batman is at Arkam Asylum? He left town. Anyways, what will happen next? Reese will be okay, right? Please post as soon as possible.

yeah we got more im so happy. this is a really cute fic, witch of course means you must continue.

What will happen next? Don't take so long. Reese is going to be okay, right? Please post as soon as possible.