Wow, that was really good! I like the way you wrote Omi. It's very realistic, considering his occupation, as are his analyses of the other Weiss assassins. Great fic!

(Ne, thank you for the quote about madness! I'm working with it now...)

~Tsukiyo

Wow...That was ...wow.

Slightly depressing, but defeinitely an interesting read ; Omi's character is well and deeply sketched. I liked reading this.

Of course I completly miss this fic the first and second sweep of the fics and it takes the third to actually open my eyes and see it. >.

It's cute that you made Omi the most mature among Weiss... when I read the first few lines I was kinda skeptical and couldn't believe that you made im that way but then after the next lines it was nice how you made it seem that way ^-^. Anyway, I'm babbling.
This is a good one shot, nicely done. But it was kind of weird that Omi was outside in the rain without a raincoat or something. oh well.