Just reviewing to say - LOVED IT!

I've read the sequal and I'm waiting for an update on that... :P

Love yer stories!
Your a brilliant author! :D

I love the story, but i'm a little confuzzled about the last chapter. was it an alternate ending or what? i don't get it. how does that tie into the othe rchapter where Jareth and Sarah are married? please explain i want to know what's going on!

WHAT!!

great story, the ending is so sad. The story held my interest the entire time i read it.

haha, i like this! cant wait to finish reading it!

Love your story character,hope you'll finish your sequel too~~!!
Love it very much~~!! :)

Oh my god, this is fantastic. I can't believe how it ended though. *trots off to read the sequel*

What the F&*k is going on? why did she turn evil, and why didn't they just take toby back, and who did she kill?

Yeah, the whole soap opera thing bothers me. It's so cheesy. I wish Jareth would make up his mind. I hate indecision in a person, lol.

Oh, it's getting better!

Great work on Linda.
This is such a twisted tale, lol. *shakes head* Homicidal Michu.
Reading on...

I love Toby! If he were seven years older I'd marry him, lol.
Nice chapter. :) You need to get rid of exclamation points in your narration though.
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I think you could have explained things better thus far. If you have to fill people in on what's going on in your author's notes, that's a bad sign.
Michu is interesting, but I feel like she and Sarah are fighting for dominance as the lead character, and it's bugging me. Hmm.
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Interesting twist. I'm not too sure I get what's going on with the real Sarah though...the whole Toby thing was confusing.
I wish you would spend a bit more time describing things. The part with the centaur was over so fast I barely got an impressin of what was happening.
Hmm...intereting twist...I like interesting twists...*grins*...

I'm back. lol. I know I'm a horrible reviewer, but just remember, no matter how critical I am of your story, if I didn't like it I wouldn't read it. :)
'"Why Sarah?!" Jareth demanded angrily as he paced his throne room. He was alone once more, his eyes constantly returning to the crystal in his hands. "Why do you play with me? What secret could you hold that would enable you to break through my crystal with only your hands? Have you acquired some kind of magic? Tell me!"' That whole section was really cheesy. It's so soap opera-esque, you know? I can just see him falling to his knees and shaking his fist at the sky, lol. Also, it was enough of a hint when you had Sarah's eye change colour, then had her touch the crystal to break it. You didn't need to be so blunt with the magic thing.
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