Aww, such an evil cliffie..And it was really interestinf,too. You should make up for it by uploading next chapter!:] Your story is pretty good, I like the plot and general idea,also characters are developing quite nicely.I'm lookinf forward to the end of it. Good luck!

Wow, random first person transition...

I didn't like it, to tell the truth. Writing in first person allows the author to tell the story instead of write the story, if you get what I mean. The rest of your writing, while in 3rd person semi-omniscient, shows the story very well.

Your first person bit just confused me and then was a bit dull.

I hope you continued with the third person writing format in the next chapter.

Great story! I guess I'd covered much of my opinions in LJ comment and PM and I don't want to repeat myself, just thought that this story deserved much more reviews ;-))

So, great story, some very interesting and refreshing ideas and perfectly written Snape! Perfect work. Thanks for writing and sharing it.

Maxx

LOVE it! your story is so good! i love the plot line and how it is very different from other stories! i really like the whole new prophecy idea and how harry and sev are connected, very interesting! OMG you left the story on a cliff hanger and i am dieing to know what happens next, update soon!

You're a cruel cruel person to write such a great story and then leave us without a finish! Love the originality and realistic way the characters behave. Wish with all my heart it was finished!

Cool! Maybe it's the musician in me (ah, if only such improv were this easy in the real world...) but this was fantastic! *starts humming the melody the words had her imagine*

Yes! I loved the musical display! Very creative!

*pouts* i couldnt post again on the last chapter...anyway...OMIGOSH You are updating soon...right? I've been following the story forever waiting for an update but alas...none have yet to reach mine computer...lol anyway update soon pwease... :(

*bounces up and down in severe frustration* Where's the rest of it? *points at summary* That says you're gonna finish it! *points at update date* That says you be a liar - or having one hell of a case of writer's block. *resumes frustrated bouncing*

You left Sev in pain!

You can't leave it there!

I'll wait for an update. . . .

Loved it! so can't wait for the next chapter.

You know, this is a really good story. Granted, it took me two days to get all the way to chapter fifty six but hey, it was worth it. XDD Anwho, i hope you will be updating relativly soon, cause i cant wait to find out what happens. Jyaa ne! -Lena

wonderful story.

My, this is such an interesting story! The whole concept of Harry and Severus being linked as they are...able to switch between seeing each other's auras...it's just, well, wicked! :)

I'd like to note that your pacing doesn't bother me a tatch. I love character interaction; plot advancement will come when it is needed. At least, that's my theory. I'm much more interested in the characters of any book, story or fanfic I read. The plot (and this one is most excellent!) is just an added bonus; a reason for the characters to interact, if you will. :)

I'll have to say that I loved it when Severus was kidnapped by the Death Eaters. I love stories like that. *shameless, I know*. Ah, well; it's much more interesting when my favourite character is in so much danger. It creates a crisis, a sense of time limit; save him, or he dies. Or worse. (Lol; is there a worse? I think so...)

Anywhoo, I'll shut up now. I'd love to see an update, whenever it is that you find the chance to do so. I love this story!

Cheers,

Ballad

*silent scream*

THAT'S the LAST chapter! You haven't update in FOREVER! What's going to happen? Is Harry going to be effected by the pain?

PLEASE UPDATE ASAP! Must know what happens next!

*is bagging*

LOL! Anyway...Wonderful story so far! But I'd like it allot more if you update soon...*hint-hint* LOL ;D