 Pervinca 6/3/01 . chapter 1Oh that was a wonderful and surprising ending! I didnt know Lucious could cry! This was realy good!:) |
 Dawn 12/21/00 . chapter 1 Can you please write one about Sirius now? |
 Dawn 11/7/00 . chapter 1 Oh, that was so sad! |
 Godforsaken 11/6/00 . chapter 1you write deep fics...they end up blasting my mind out. |
 Mina2 11/6/00 . chapter 1Good :) (damn, I suck at reviews... but it WAS good!) |
 magicallittleme 11/5/00 . chapter 1I don't know what to say. It was good, yeah, so don't get mad at it again. Um, it was reallly you-ish. I feel really sorry for Lucius now. I really can't think of anything else to comment on, so I'll stop now. ) |
 tippy 11/5/00 . chapter 1 that was really really really good. but very violent. but it was still great! draco shouldn't have killed her though. draco's not supposed to be evil. oh well this was terrific and realy really realyl well written. |
 D.M.P 11/4/00 . chapter 1Whoa. That was weird. blinks Wow. _ I was a bit confused about the time frame, but that's probably because I'm reading this at midnight... Very Nice, PikaCheeka, the fight wasn't so bad (Hey, you have to read a couple dozen Animorphs books to really get a hang of it _) And the Mudblood Death eaters... I never really thought about that... But of course (duh) there would be some... I just assumed that all Death Eaters were pureblood, because Voldemort had a thing against wizards who weren't purebloods... anyhoo, good job! (Oh, and btw, the title still makes me think of Lupin... tee hee hee... you know what I mean... ) |
 DestinyMalzen 11/4/00 . chapter 1Oooooooooooooooooooooooo...freaky! Oh, and thanks for reviewing my fics...I'm coming out with a new one in a few days. A long one. Yay! Anyway, this is sooooooooo good! So good. SOOOOO good! VERY VERY VERY GOOD! It's not bizarre...well, maybe it is, but in a VERY VERY VERY good way! And I would probably suck at writing "fist" fights- but you don't! This was exciting and intriguing and wonderful! Oh, and about your Melted Ice thing, you can write a sequel! E-mail me at DracoLuvr413@malfoy_manor.zzn.com, and I shall tell you how! And in case I don't see ya, good afternoon, good evening, and good night! |
 Madd Spammer 11/4/00 . chapter 1Wow. That was amazing. I'm at a loss for words. GOOD JOB! |
 Morag X. Henegev 11/4/00 . chapter 1cool story. i don't think that arrogance is sucha bad thing. oh well i'm glad that you're writting about lucius. i would like if there was more writters like you. and about what you said in the story that people are calling them Goths, oh well everyone thinks that i am one. cause i wear trench coat, almost always black, and i have a cross. |
 Moon 11/4/00 . chapter 1The psychology is excellent, not just Lucius' (who doesn't have any good in him) but especially Draco's... he reminds me a bit of the flip-side of Tom Riddle: smart kid raised with evil, only in his case privileged evil. The plot seemed mostly like a backdrop to the characters, but that's fine. The last line... "not we nor any other human", maybe? There seems to be a negation missing. 3-inch Snapes, now I'm jealous, except that my cats would probably eat them. |
 tygrestick 11/4/00 . chapter 1uh oh! great story! |
 Doll 11/4/00 . chapter 1**Blinks twice** Wow. Just... wow. I liked the humanity part, it struck me as somehow ironic. Humans without humanity... hmmm... I'd write more, but the full effect has yet to penitrate into my mind and I'm trying really hard not to fall asleep as I write this, but its really good and I have to figure out a slightly more intelligent way to form thoughts when writting reviews... |
 Inspiring Author and her Best 11/4/00 . chapter 1Ok that was weird, but I got it all right. Mind you I'm weird too so I supposed it's balanced. The witch burnings could be a reason why some of the purebloods despise muggles and mudbloods. It's a valid point no one really thought of. And it wasn't just witch burnings though was it. The testing also could've killed them. I never thought about it, but the Malfoy's do stretch back a long way and maybe they suffered by the witch hunts. It's oh so clear. Great, fab! And you couldn't really substitue Lupin and Sirius because they don't have children and Lucius went so well with it. |