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blueKnight-10 2003-03-10 . chapter 5
ei. that was a great story hope you'll finish it as soon as possible. i can't wait to read the next chapter or if there's any chapter next but i do hope you'll have a continuation of this. i think this is not a good ending if you end right now. well that's all. wait a minute. where do you get these kind of story? you wrote them well and i think you have a very good inspiration. keep up the good work :p
Ria Sakazaki 2003-01-30 . chapter 4
hahahahahaha! nireview ko sarili kong fic! hehehehehehe! galing ko talaga! (kapal!)
Miko-chan 2002-12-22 . chapter 3
Hi Ria-chan! Well, here goes nothing...^^;

Mayu-chan is really cute...And I think it will be an interesting turn of events if Mitsui, Rukawa, Haruko, Sakuragi and Mayu would be VLW (Victims of the Love Web) Personally, I would like Mitsui, but it would be also interesting with Rukawa...he's having a hard time concealing it, ne? hehehehe...Sakuragi-kun, as loyal as he might be to Haruko-hime, might take a little interest in Mayu. Oi! This could show true colors of Haruko! she could be jealous or something...Imagine, Mayu is the center of attraction. Of course, that would be a little OOC of Haruko. But she is a human, ne?

I hope this would not dampen your spirits to write but pneumonia...is actually curable. YES, it caused many deaths but it doesn't last long in a year, usually pneumonia last only for seven days. So, I guess you should change its sickness into cancer or something.(just a suggestion)want to help you. You can see me if you want to torture and slice my head off, but I really want to discuss about fics. I would be more than welcome to entertain you, if you would want too.

Have a nice vacation, Merry Christmas and God Bless!
Yuririn 2002-12-08 . chapter 2
A dance club! Cool... this is something new...
Yuririn 2002-12-08 . chapter 1
Wow! I almost thought her brother was Ken Hidaka of Weiss Kreuz! ^_^ Anyway... keep it going. Yay Rukawa-kun!
Hikaru Inverse 2002-11-16 . chapter 1
I really really really like this chapter alot! please continue! very interesting!! I really like the intro too. Make sure you continue k?
choco no baka 2002-11-09 . chapter 1
haven't read the story yet.. -___-;; gomen yo~ i'm on the go, so i printed it out first...

i'll come back n review again ^-^
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