finish this story please ! i like it

Okay, this story is really good(dont be fooled by some bad reviews) But it appears the reason that it has come to a screeching halt (no offence intended) is because the last couple chapters didn't bode well with the rest of the story. Perhaps it was the main character getting pregnant while theyre in high school, or her and her yami merging together like that. It seems a tad bit confusing. Also, the battle between them and victor seemed incredibly short and unexplained. (why couldnt the monster he summoned obey him?) So, my suggestion, after reading the story, is to repost it to get people to fall in love with it again (which is easy to do!^.^) and delay the love scene and marrage until the last few chapters, or (if the response is really bad) take them out completley.
I'm sorry if I seem too critical, but it's out of liking this story and hating that it's stopped. I hope that you decide to continue and repost it!
huggles all around,
Reviewer

man, you're sick. just sick.

man, you're sick. just sick.

I'm sorry, this chapter just wasn't good. It didn't live up to the standards you set before.

OMG WHAT A STUPID CHAPTER! I READ HALFWAY THROUGH AND I ALMOST PUKED IT WAS SO BAD! WHAT TYPE OF WRITERS ARE YOU TWO?!?!? IT'S SO SELF CENTERED! WHAT THE HELL!!?!?! DON'T YOU TWO READ YOUR REVIEWS?!?!!? WE ALL WANTED TO SEE MORE OF YUNIE AND THE PLOT AND LESS OF YOU! GOD! IF YOU TWO WANT TO SALVAGE YOUR REPUTATION ON FANFICTION.NET THEN I STRONGLY SUGGEST REPOSTING AND REWRITING THIS HORRID CHAPTER!

ok ive been reading the reviews(i know, i'm a freak!) and i can't help but agree with them. This fic IS self centered. AND there is no point to Yunie unless she caused this somehow...please don't let that be the case. AND this is the 50th review so i'm sure we all are expexting an update soon.
Later

I agrres with those peopple about that girl yami. there shouldd be morw bout her in da story.

Not too shabby. You shouldn't wait for reviews to update though. (at least that's what I think you're doing. I read most of my stories from the Just in section. That is how you draw in new readers.

Yep it is a bit self-centered.

cool...UPDATE.

Give more info on the card and is it yunie or yuma/yuna? i think u used all 3.

dont like it. not enough yami romance. get more conections to the past up in here.

Yea yea very nyce. get to the updatin will ya?! my friend jess (bumpercarrofdoom133) WILL NOT SHUT UP UNTIL YOU GUYS UPDATE! PLEASE! I CANT STAND IT ANYMORE!

cool story i'm sorta surprised cuz the first chap. wasnt really that good (no offense)