Oh God be the name.. T-This wfinal chapter was the perfect soulution to this aboslutly brilliant story. And I have to say KrysSayain A job well done. * take huge stamp that says good job and stamps it on you forehead.*

-Dark Amaya

D I love it! LOVELOVELOVE.

The Saint-Sinner paralels (Is that the word I'm looking for?) were some of my favorite bits. The psychological development of your original characters was masterfully done.

...*Speechlessnessness* the ending was just lovely. Not cliché. Not anticlimatic. PERFECT.

Congratulations, this is going on my favorite stories list. *Add*

NO IT'S OVER *sniffle* i'm gonna miss reading this

please say u'll continue writing and start another story when you get an idea

i really loved your work!

i'm glad u managed to end your story

i can only imagin how happy you are .

*have lots of mint*

i'll be waiting for another story

peace

kris

lovely lovely lovely! D

I assume this is the ending? It is really sweet, just perfect! )

I had been wondering how you were going to end the fic, since I think that this sort of tale (involving a little child growing up) was generally pretty difficult to end. Most people end it with a marriage which is rather cliched, but yours is really good. )

I especially like the Saint-Sinner bit... reminds me of a cartoon I watched where the character had a mini angel and mini devil floating above either of his shoulders and trying to convince him to do certain things. They nearly always ended up fighting. )

All in all, a fantastic job done! And I still like Ranu best! ) hehehe.

off to read your other fics now...

Kris has gone... completely mad? And I love Chuey's author notes they're so funny. *glares at ff.net pps responsible*

This is getting v. strange. Maybe I should read the fic again I don't really get this chap...

OMFG.. Wow.. I just read like five chapters and I have to say.. YOu knoow how to leave us a clif hanger.. Please update

- Dark Amaya

damn ff.net is really getting screwy

oh shit i think i have a chapter like that!

it's my 100 review special

well if they take it down i won't loose my reviews i keep all my reviews in my email

anways about ur story

sad chapter good but sad

lol

keep up your good work!

peace

kiwi

Oh my. So much psychology. I love these kind of fanfics. You're doing an awesome job Smile-floof. Can't wait to read the next chapter. _

*gasp* *sniffle* my mommy threw away my last mint cookie but i can give you a sticker . *hands a pretty brite sticker*

i'm so happy your getting chapters out so frequently!

keep going

love the story

poor ranu

T.T

peacies

kiwi

No! Now both Kris and Ranu will have tortured pasts *wa*

I really like the kinda strange bond Kris has with Vegeta its not the same as with Trunks or Bra but still quite fatherly.

I love your writing, its totally the best!

Kris and Ranu are so perfect it's almost sure to be doomed!

Veggiesosmart! And Bulma's mom can be kinda funny.