Hey! Thank god those fools finally let you back on! I was wondering what the cause of update delay was.

Okay, onto the chapter(s)

5 was a nifty one, but I don't think Kanis will live very long when Jeris finds out he turned his girlfriend against him. Maybe he'll let Reaper kick him around a little.

6 Was also a good chapter, tho both it and 5 were like you said: Short. Will the later ones be longer?

Right now I'm half-expecting Dr. Nardock and Jeris will abduct TJ and basically be holding all of Zi hostage, then.

well this is something that i will not be able to sleep until you update it.

Thanks for the name correction, BTW.

*Jeris has Reaper put a Smackdown on Kanis for (probably in the long run) stealing his very first girl*

Would have been nice to have kept this "relationship" for several episodes, but I guess there's no other negative things. Everything else looks fine to me.

Great Fic so far man! never stop...seroiusly...don't or ill hunt you down...

YAY!!! CHEMUK’S ALIVE!!! ::friends next to me, who has no idea what an organoid is looks at me oddly:: Okay you can turn back around Lauren…. YAY!!! UPDATED QUICKLY!!!!!!

there is something dark coming i can feel it

OH man! I must know who the girl is! I MUST KNOW!!! So good...keep it up!!!

Good chapter, but Jeris's organoid's name is Reaper. It's body is copper-colored.

Wonder how Chemuk could have survived. I thought Nardock drained it clean... aw well. I'll come by later today to check out the next chapter like you mentioned^_^

KAWAII!! TJ is so cute!!

YEA! KEEP IT GOING! You got Kanis just right. if you want you can pair him up with someone, but just keep this story up!

::claps hands:: YAY YAY YAY! You FINALLY wrote a sequel!!!! Did my email annoy you enough? And did other people do the same?? ^_^ Once again, if ya ever need help writing, you know who to ask! (BWA HA!)

A good chapter, tho cliffhangers make me want to strangle people. *strangles a pillow* Can't wait for the battle! Dr. Nardock.... Jeris..... who knows what they have up their sleeves this time....

I was waiting for this to happen...
It's never a good thing when the person you're interrogating explodes...it's also got to be shocking to find out that the two villains you thought you defeated years ago have come back and are about a 100 miles away from you with a small army of zoids.
Well anyway...good chapter as always. I'll be waiting for the next one
*disappears in a cloud of smoke*

HELL YEA! Let's keep on going with this fic! YEA YEA YEA! Awesome man keep it up.

OOH! You finally started your new sequal story! Excellent! Can't wait for part 2.