Woah baby! That was really cute- you put alot of effort and emotion into it. :) if you ever revise it, I suggest maybe a bit more detail...

I don't think I've ever gotten more enjoyment out of a fic even approaching as few words as this one. This fic shatters the preconception that length need be associated with substance. Much better than I thought it was possible for a fic of this length to be.

This is actually a resolution fic of a sort, with everyone reasonably in character which is a minor miracle in its own right at any length.

Good characterization, dialog, plot, description... Very well done.

cute. short, simple, and sweet.

Very nice.

I bet anything that stone was for "I love you"...

Bittersweet, and deep, great work.

Aw! That was so mushy and romantic, and so darn true, that I just want to cuddle it! Hidoi!

soo...sweet! I loved it! Very cool. I hope to see more like it soon! :)

Really nice!
Few words, but very meaningful...
Keep on writing...perhaps a fic where they´ll come closer...^_^

I wish I could write like that. I really do. All of your stories ae absolutely fabulous.

Very nice... Concise and... *felt.*

Another winner! Liked this one a lot... even if it is short, I always like stories where Akane wakes up and shakes Ranma up a bit ^_^. (I always want to do that to the two of them anyway, so maybe that's why I like fanfics about that)
Anyway, I love your work, and its nice to see good authors experimenting with styles. The Impressionistic style used here was nice, and I liked that they were realizing things that need to be realized without being to out of character... Good Job and keep up the good work!

awwwwwww.... that was(sniff) so nice. (sniff) almost made me cry. hehe. good story.

Suteki...

I absolutely loved that.

Very nice, captures the tension between Akane and Ranma well. Needs a little work on the language - many people have problems with making their sentences too long, but yours feel too short, especially at the beginning.

Some description of what Ranma thinks, or how he reacts, to each truth would be nice, but it's not essential.

All in all, it's a good little fic.

SP

Loved it! Very meaningful...