Rissa of the Saiya-Jin 2003-02-18 . chapter 4*giggles* Veggie-chan without monsters, guns and explosions is like a sandwich without peanut butter!! Keep writin'! |
Yurai-Mitsukai 2002-12-08 . chapter 4 Be still my heart!! The story is going great. I love it! *_* Please, if you can e-mail me when you've updated!!!
-LOVE & PEACE ^__- Y |
Dawn Dusk 2002-11-27 . chapter 4 Neat storyline! it's really keeped me intriuged(spell check please) anywho, I cant wait for the next chapters! Please continue!!~Dawn Dusk |
Emerald-eyes 2002-11-20 . chapter 4B/Vness AHOY!!
well, as always beautifully writen (I say that in every review to you don't I?)
Exams suck...plain and simple!
Ok...I LOVE it.
Please email when you update. Check out my profile for it...kay? |
veronica yuy 2002-11-19 . chapter 4 awww...so sweet so sweet! write more already! |
alex 2002-11-19 . chapter 4 good! Write some more! I really like it... it's a different start than all the other ones i heard. (that's a good thing) =) good luck! |
2002-11-16 . chapter 3 cool keep on writing and update soon |
alex 2002-11-16 . chapter 3 GOOD! Write more! You're like the only person I've read that has almost PERFECT grammer...Congrats. :) |
chicoro-chan1 2002-11-15 . chapter 3WOW! Amazing story. I am loving the whole, Bulma not being the stuck up rich snob in this one. I can't wait to find out what happens next! If you get the time, check out my story. Oh... Do you have an update list? I'd love to be added. G2G! Buh byes!
~Chicoro-chan |
loju 2002-11-13 . chapter 2 oooooh! vege-san to the rescue! can't wait for the next chapter!!!! blast you and your cliffhangers! |
Emerald-eyes 2002-11-12 . chapter 2It is true isn't it? Women are slightly looked over when it comes to technolgy.
Thankfully the world IS more educated about Women's rights.
Thanks for clearing it up a little for me, the whole living with who thing.
I liked the description and the things the characters said (eg Bulma's From Darkness To Light) I'm sort of soppy so I like that kind of thing. Beautifully done, nice and long and with my fave thing
Vegeta... |
jess 2002-11-12 . chapter 2 wow come on rite another one i really really love vegeta n i cant wait to read him in the story so u betta hurry up n rite a new 1 b cuz im so exited. come on come on u got my blood puppin now rite another 1 b 4 i jump in the comp and beat u up! lol. or ill have my vegeta do it 4 me lol well if i beat uup then u wont rite no more n if vegeta kills u u wont b able 2 eithere so i guess i wont. u kno u r lucky the last guy wasnt so u shuld b thatnkful u left a cliffy lol well ya i g2g so c ya |
jess 2002-11-12 . chapter 2 wow come on rite another one i really really love vegeta n i cant wait to read him in the story so u betta hurry up n rite a new 1 b cuz im so exited. come on come on u got my blood puppin now rite another 1 b 4 i jump in the comp and beat u up! lol. or ill have my vegeta do it 4 me lol well if i beat uup then u wont rite no more n if vegeta kills u u wont b able 2 eithere so i guess i wont. u kno u r lucky the last guy wasnt so u shuld b thatnkful u left a cliffy lol well ya i g2g so c ya |
Mei Lee 2002-11-12 . chapter 2 Ahhhh! I love it! Vegeta to the rescue! Can't wait for the next chapter. Hurry up, will ya? You've got some fans here, and we want the next chapterrrr!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
2002-11-11 . chapter 2 cool chapter update soon ok? |