Honestly, I'm liking it. I wrote my own F/E, and was more than disappointed to see that the few others people have written are wildly out of character. I look forward to reading more...

What a fun fanfic! You really enjoyed writing this story and it shows. Most people portray Folken as serious and depressed. But I don't think his character was always like that in the series. You did a good job of showing his lighter side.
Princess Eries simply doesn't get enough attention and it was nice to see her fleshed out!

This...
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My God, this is BRiLLiANt!
*swallows tears*

This is the Perfect, the, (timid laugh) Ideal Eries x Folken fic!

*bows & bows & bows & bows some more*

Hm.

Wow.

These are some really, really good fragments.

I like how you write this.

I really really really liked your fic! I'm really into Folekn and Eries fics even if they aren't romance like this one. My favorite chapter would have to be the second one. I thought that was very amusing. Good job.
-KlutzyGirl

i really liked your story, im a big fan of escaflowne and i think you did there personalitys just right. I like it how folken seemed to be in love with eries(no way hes in love with me!! ahha sorry ~.~) Folken is mine ok?) hahahah...any wase i really liked it and hope you make more stories!!

That's so sad! But an absolutely wonderful story. I love F/E pairings even when they end sadly. Folken's vision of what might have been was so beautiful. Great story! I give it two thumbs up!

Really well done. The right amount of sentiment and detachment for a perfect ending. I can't wait to read your Folken+Sora story.
Beautifully sad.
GG~

asides from the not knowing exactly what F was referring to as a "rose colour" we really enjoyed this.
*sigh* too bad F's vision of being king in Fanelia was never meant to be.

I was not at all disappointed. Tragic and lovely and could have happened within the series. You have a great way of getting into the characters' heads. One thing I definitely like is that the characters seem to think differently; that is, they operate like real people with different kinds of logic.

well I guess they never really got to talk, but can't wait for your other story to come up!

*sigh* I understnd that this is the perfect stopping point, but I'm still sad that it's over. Your characterization of Folken was great. I'm looking forward to your new fic idea! Peace out -
~Rai Dorian

I should have reviewed you earlier in order to goad you into continuing this.

I like your Folken. He is tragic without self-pity, dutiful without undue martyrism, shrewd without arrogance, and willing to learn from others; all sound character traits. I think I like Folken/Eries. In the series I liked her best of the sisters.

I have a hard time imagining series Folken in such a social situation; it must be terribly hard to write. Write what you feel because what you're producing is enjoyable.

Yes!!! You're writing a third part? As for the confrontation between Folken and Allen... yes, I think that woud be funny. Please update soon.

Hey!! you didn't tell us you updated..grrrr.

Anyway, this was really fun to read. R esp. liked how you called F "this disturbing enigma" bwahahahah! (he does kind of ooze around in the series, ne?)

Please continue--you have to at least get to a Eries reflection after F dies.

As for the A vs F confrontation--only one problem with that is that A has already kissed Hitomi at this point and may be engaged? (sorry, we're stickler for timeline issues--but we're sure you can work it out)

By the way, epilogue for our fic "Asturia" is up--pleeeeeeease check it out :)