Part of the reason I chose this name, really…

I just stumbled upon this while surfing aimlessly among the seas of badly written fanfiction.
You have wrote a true classic. Great job

This has got to be the best-written fic from a minor/marginal character's point of view that I've ever read. While a little more proofreading could have been done, the errors don't really detract from the flow of the story or reader comprehesion, and you wove narration and description together almost seamlessly. Keep up the good work!

Oh wow. This was so heatbraking. And so real. Really it can't be described.

God damn, this one was cryptic. It's probably the saddest of the stories I've read so far, because if you think of it, it's probably the way people in the government see us, as well. The lower, working class citizens...the students...we all have dreams, fears, hopes, ambitions...and when it comes down to it, we are all the same to them, in some odd sense of the word. If I were to die today, getting shot in the chest while reading your story, would anyone care? Maybe a few who knew me...but that would be it. Even if a thousand people died in a massacre, the only one whose name would be remembered is that of the one who caused the mass-scale killing. Not the thousands of victims, not the ones who had to clean up the mess...just the one who killed. Funny, isn't it, the irony of this world... Anyway, story #6 down. If anything, I would like to know what the character's name was...at least it brings a conclusion to the cryptic tale. But if you don't want to add one, it's fine. I understand...the anonymity of it makes it so that it could be ANYONE...you, me, anybody. Heh. Anyhow, keep writing. I'll look forward to any more you have to write.

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I never thought of the lowly technician.
I raise my hat to the unsung heroes of Evangelion,
who all too often got caught in the crossfire.

damn that is too sad...

very unique perspective on the events of eva.

Intense. Definately a good story.

I've read this over and over and over, it's good.

While nameless, it's probably the dead guy the woman was dragging in EoE. In which case, you -could- have provided an alternate ending where the Nameless Tech winds up in the Black Moon with Yumi (Rei took even the dead) ... but I guess you had your reasons.

Write more stories.

Hey good job Kalus. You've taken a page right out of Chuck Palahnuik's word processor. Hell you've taken half a dozen, you have.

I have a few tiny suggestions: Try replacing the word 'cow-like' with 'bovine'; the word God is always capitalized, execept when speaking of the dead greek ones; and you lose chronol coherency occasionally with scenes blending that I believe were ment to be apart. Such as the aftermath party and the death of Angel #17. Maybe you forgot a set of elipses?

It's weird. After all this time, after all the different fics that have been made, all the different points of view, you think you've seen everything. But then, you'll eventually see something that'll still surprise you, catch you off guard.

Normally, I'm not too fond of angst, but this was just too well written to be ignored.

Well played.

Amazing, simply amazing.

You took a original idea and turned it into something thought of, but never, for a lack of a better term, done as well as you just did. In my point of view anyway.

The pilots were not the only ones who got hurt, but of course they were the ones who got all the attention.

Hmmm, the story was one of the best I read in a while, and I really didnt notice any grammer or spelling errors.

Everytime the character seemed to get to a high point he was dragged back down, and everytime he was down he got kicked. I couldnt love it more.

Angst, complete and simple angst, it was what I was looking for and I found it. I am still aghast that you pictured the only characters that wasnt really characters....o.o

Please continue to write stories.

Ps. You made me want to get finished with a story I was just doing.

Somebody else made an honourable attempt to write this kind of piece a while back, adopting the perspective of an alcoholic intelligence agent if I recall correctly. I've thought for a long time that the most marginal characters' stories demand to be told & you've done it so successfully as to make further efforts all but superfluous. Congratulations.

Art...simply a work of art. This is the kind of story that you keep thinking about hours afterwards. Small critique, your quote at the end didn't really do anything for me. The last line has a lot more impact and is a much more powerful way to end the story.

Oh my God, that was beautiful... Very good storyline and you really let us (the readers) seep into your character's eyes and view things the way he would. Good job!

Although, there is one tiny problem... After your ellipses (sp? Anyways, an ellipse is when you have a series of periods), you didn't put any spaces. I was taught that after an ellipse, you always put at least one space.

Oh, and the lyrics to Duvet are actually,
"And you don't even feel the pain" (although some people say it's "feel a thing"... Which one it is, I'm not sure, but it's not "feel or care" I know that much.)

Good job! Keep it up!