Aw. Adorable!
I don't usually read Luke and Lorelai fics because people always get the characterizations wrong, but you were spot-on. I'm very impressed, and this was adorable! :D

-T.C.

i know you wrote this a cery long time ago, but i just wanted to say that i lovveed this story!

Yeah for the authentic snappy dialogue and random conversation turns!

Well, I realised that since I've been recommending this story to people, I should probably review. Yeah, it's amazing, wonderful, happy, fluffy, schmoopy and just the right length. I love it. And I completely disagree with noele because well... enjoy your unwanted pregnancy and possible STD's, since safe sex is apparently a turn-off for you. I know it's fic-land and Gilmore land, but still, that's the reality. And who says something has to be perfect? I don't think it took away from the story at all. Love the story!

AREHGBIOWCEKJOPJ! wow. sorry, I find it hard to be coherant after reading particularly wonderful L/L stories. Clearly, this is one of them. BRILLIANCE! PERFECTION!

You lost me with the "condom". Any story where the intimate moments of these two characters involve a condom make me cringe and I am saying it every chance I get. To me it is a complete turn off. I don't really see the point. These stories are not about one night stands, they are or should be about a very special relationship.

Should leave the condoms for the likes of "jason" not Luke.

Sorry about my honesty but that's how strongly I feel. So I won't comment on the rest of the story.

N.

Fantastic. That was fluffy as hell and damned adorable.

Very well written. I'm impressed with the charecterazation and the dedication to the style of the show. I wish I could spell. This is my first time reading a gilmore girls fanfic and I have to say you have set the bar high for any other stories I will read. ALso, I this it's brave of you to take a different plot format. It's a typical stroy on it's own... but the way you told it and the order will make it much more memerable.
::high five: :):):):):):)

DEFINATELY the SINGLE greatest Luke/Lorelai story ever written. This is absolutely amazing. Every word was perfect. Not a single one out of place or unnecessary.

I love the order you put it in too, because the last chapter was a much better one to end it with.

loved it-thanks

I just read "The Morning After the Night Before". I thought it was great! I loved how you wrote it starting from the end. And the last chapter was incredible. Very hot without being raunchy. That takes real skill.

hey i loved your story it was so great. I hate hard core dirty stories like that and i have def been smacked by the schmoopy/ fluffy stick in the past cause im all for schmoopy stories. Anyway, you captured Lorelai's personality perfectly with all the reandom things she says. I guess if i had to say one thing that could be improved i would say...probably I'd say the part where he starts to leave after they makeout was a little unclear. I can't figure out why he did that. Also right after she says stay i think his questioning her about it might have gone on a little long. Overall your story is the best I've read. Great job!

So what if you wrote this three years ago- I'm still reviewing, darnit. Because I loved it- the non-smuttiness of it. the backwardness of it. loved it loved it loved it. :)

love!

wicked! love this story. doesn't seem to matter that you left out the dirty parts. haha. lovely story :)