Wow.. that was really good. I like how the story ended, it seemed really thought out. Keep up the good work!

wai, that was so... so wow. I love u ^.^ this part's so cool. Alex and Fidget would be such a cute couple *grins*

Wah! Action man dead? Pritty good story though.

I really like the song. I don't the actual Weathered song that much...Creed's erd album just kinda sucked (their first 2 were much better). But i like what you did with it. :)

Sorry about "Weathered", my computer was, and still is, acting up on me.
i'll try and fix is soon... but please bear with it.
Kerro

Creative and in-depth. A well thought-out manuscript and very satisfying.
I enjoyed it. :)

Deep.

A creative view on Alex's AMP Factor. Rather interesting...perhaps you could dive into what happened before his death, like the last week or so. A neat short story or an event along those lines. :)