That was brilliant. I don't read slash, and I noticed you wrote a lot of it, so I was a little nervous about trying this story. It was wonderful. I liked Wes/Lilah but mostly **BECAUSE** Lilah contains the qualities displayed in Fred here. I hope you write a sequel, why not try something AU? What happens after the end scene in Desires? Also, if you've seen recent Angel episodes, you're probably pretty happy. I think Illyria definitely likes Wesley. So please think about doing a sequel or some other Angel work that isn't slash, so those of us who don't like slash can appreciate your writing anyway.

Although I'm not that crazy about "bad Fred" unless she's crazy bad Fred, I definitely like Fred & Wes together. This is well-written, too.

You must continue, I love dark wesley and I love dark fred, and I love Wes/Fred... evil is good. wonderful writing. I do hope you'll have more:)