good job! love it! kagome is kagome :D Hopefully Inuyasha chooses her! :DD I like how Kagome says all this in your story!! Good job!!

I love your poem it is so touching.

cool. im guessing this is a fic that won't have a sequel, right? even though, i hope to read a second chap the future

I love this it's so cool i read it everyday i printed it out and showed it to all my friends it's awesome great job!!!!!

This was lovely. Simply lovely. I can't express in words, really, how nice and refreshing this was. This is going to go on my favorites list, most surely.

Very clever word play and rhyming technique. I'm definitely impressed! Great job! You capture the very essence of Kagome's confusion and frustration flawlessly.