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| Kay Willow 2004-06-17 ch 1, | abuseIt's so hard to capture Teela, and when done correctly it's almost always fascinating. This is a masterful look at the way she was feeling -- I love your portrayal of both her and Kuro. It has a ring of truth to it, and I like it a lot. Thanks for sharing this. |
| Whistle 2003-10-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseNice job you did here. Yu and Teela aren't exactly the world's easiest people to portray in a funeral but you managed pretty well. |
| Paradoxical Goddess 2003-04-05 ch 1, | abuseHah. Hey sara, is sunny here. The funny thing about this is that I can totally imagine you reading this out loud. *shakes head* whew |
| Omzack 2002-11-12 ch 1, | abuseI really love your fics. You have such an understanding of MK and the characters itself. Your a great writer altogether. Your fics are so greatly detailed it’s like looking at the manga itself. Isn't this really how Teela portrays her emotions towards her comrades? Why won’t Kuro let Teela go to the funeral? Please write more I must know. |