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Reviews For: Curse of the Miasma
niyanna 2005-02-02 . chapter 3
please update soon. wondering whats going to happen to Brock is driving me crazy!
Sammi 2003-01-26 . chapter 1
Freaky....my name is Samantha Lynn..
2002-11-10 . chapter 1
the creepy thing is I have a friend named Samantha Lynn...
Morbane 2002-11-10 . chapter 1
No need to be self-deprecating, I don't think there's anything wrong with this chapter except that I feel kind of also-ran-ish because I just invented a poison Eon called 'Miasmeon'. You won't say I've plagiarised, will you? *groan*.

Anyway, the radio idea was original. I wasn't so sure about the high-school diploma stakes - that seemed a little predictable - but that's really the only thing I didn't like. Neat story which has me hoping to read more. Good suspense, plot, etc. :)
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