great story ^_^

Great Story.

that was awsome!u should write another one, unless u already have, i cant read that much, but anywho, that was kool, and im glade kikyo was the bad guy.thnx for writing something like that, ive been waiting for something that good for a wile.

I suggest you use a spelling/grammar checker to look through your work there seem to be quite a lot of mistakes. But I'm not critisizing :) this is a GREAT story, your writing is perfect, you just need to work on your spelling and grammar. Also try not to repeat words like when Kagome was getting out of the bathroom. Figure and delicate can be replaced by other words. Oh and you don't have to put too much formal words in, like you did here:
"With an appreciative nod, she stepped back inside the bathroom and cleared the mirror of the haze with her hand making a perfect little circle for her face and also creating a small squeaking noise."
Loosen up when you write, you'll find that you can write better. Anyway as I said everything's great. If you improve your grammar a bit you might even get an award someday :D

that was so good I hope to read more by you!...C:

to funny, but you never did say why miroku said Sango had breast cancer. thats the only part that I didn't get

um not to question you but did they get a cure or something so kagome won't die?

Whoa...Welcoming HUG? Once again Whoa.

Whoa Inu was a total ** in this chapter. Sounded like some physco, but I know he ain't.

great fic!

This s interesting...

hmm.. wonder wats d truth. - sighs...

Great story!! I really enjoyed it!! I love the whole assassin thing but the only thing that threw me off was the fact that you made Kagome seem like one of the best assassins Naraku had but she kept getting into trouble and had to be saved by Inuyasha and stuff because she couldn't dodge a bullet! I mean come on! She could at least act like a top assassin. Other than that it was a really good story!!

aww, i loved it. it was so romantic and...i loved it, i just wish i could have read the story while you were writing it. it was really sweet and i liked how you made Kagome hate pink... i also would lke to say that it is 5:43 am and i have been up all night reading your fic because i couldn't stop. and i really liked the part when Inuyasha and Kagome finally got together. but my favorite part was when Kikyo died. usually i cry at stuff like that but when she died i laughed, pumped my fist in the air and shouted 'HELL YEAH!'. but of couse on my wallpaper i have a picticue of Kikyo bleeding and it says,'Bleed Kikyo... Bleed! And then DIE!' lets just say...it makes me happy to see it everyday -.- ; well i guess i shouldn't pester you about it but have you thought of making a sequel, just having it be about the inu/kag fluff, i mean Kag, Inu, San, and Mir could go on vacation or something. i really like how you made your fluff between them and i need more of it.

Ja ne,Kagome1322.

Hii!! I love this story! There's so much action and a bit fluff to sum it all up!! I guess this review is for 1-10...I like the way you put Kagome equal to Inuyasha with the strength and atittude.

i really enjoyed this story and i cant wait to read more stories from you. the only questions i had were what about the virus. did they find a cure for it? who found the cure? what happened after miroku got stuck by the dart? that's about it. good luck with your stories.