Wow - very intense little ficlet, and very well-written. Excellent!

NO! It can't be over...Well, I guess it can. Great job! You did a really wonderful job!

Oh, this is so sad. Its perfect but so sad and upseting, i've always thought elves lived perfect lives but this is a reality check. Well written, beautiful story. I also read your 'elrond's boys' that brilliant you should write more on them or perhaps Arwen.
Tara x

Great story. It was a sad ending,but it was written very well.

I know you wrote this a while age, but I am just starting to read it. There is something I do not understand. I would have no idea what to say to Celebrian if I were another elf. So why is she so upset that no one will talk with her. What do say to someone who went through that?

I don't know what to say. This is possibly the best story I have ever read. Thank you so much. I was a bit worried at first that this would be fluffy like your other stories, but you never cease to prove me wrong. Thank you again for making me appreciate what I have.

Those pitiful excuses for friends! But it's great to know that Cel is recovering! Or recovered... no, not that... AG i hate everything

Oh Elrohir, that's cold... Elladan is so responsible. The eldest twin always is,you know (sorry, I'm like Elladan, the eldest twin,but only by one minute) I like Elrond in this chapter

This chapter is more relaxed...it's like a break from the other, more intense chapters.

And I thought I was crying before...

I hope there's more about Arwen to come. I can't even begin to imagine how any of them managed to cope through all of this.

Amazing. Absolutley brilliant. Are you sure you aren't Tolkien?

I don't know what to say... This is one of hte most amazing things I've ever read. Poor, poor Elladan. Why does he hide his emotions? Elrond can come take care of Celebrian now... but... OH! I can't bear it any longer! Goodbye, creul world! Okay, it's not THAT sad, but it sure got me crying.

oh no oh no oh no oh no oh no this is so amazingly terribly horribly sad i can barely bear to read it. my mental pictures are terrifying

This is amazing. How incredibly sad! Poor Celebrian! She seems so scared and feels so worthless... this is an amazing piece of writing, as usual. Probably the deepest thing you've ever done.