Wow, great story. I want you to know that your story is the FIRST CSI story
I've read. Loved the suspense and angst. Nick and Warrick are my favorites
on the show. When you mentioned Warricks last talk with his mother, how
unusual it almost was, it reminded me of my own. It was unusual. We were
laughing and talking. None of the usual arguements. And that was a few hours
before her stroke. Racism is a terrible thing and I think you've written it well.
I've experienced it from a different point of view though. I'm white and grew
up in a black and puerto rican neighborhood. I think you've captured the feeling
of being discriminated against very good. Now poor Nick has to face the fact that
he took a life now. I just wanna reach into this screen here and give them two
a HUGE hug. Can I? Please?

Anyway, looking forward to the final chapter.

And you mentioned a Nick story coming soon??????? (hint hint)

Whoo hoo! Warrick lives, Nicky saves the day AND you updated all your other stories? Wow, X-mas came early for me! I thought this was a really good way to end it. It showed the dynamic of the friendship between Warrick and Nick, it showed the vulnerability of the characters and it was just a perfect way to wrap up the whole thing! I have to go now........gotta go review your other work! Happy holidays!

You did not just do that. Tell me you did not just do that. You cannot leave me hanging like this. Me, Queen of the Cliffhangers is imploring you to TELL ME WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!! Oh please, it is almost X-mas and all I want is for you to update! This is SOOOO good! You wrote in your review that you wished you had half my talent....funny, I was just thinking the same thing about you. I love it, and you had better update soon or else you'll never get another story out of me!

Are you trying to torment me? Leaving the story hanging like that - how dare you? I need ta oknow what happens, and I need to know now :-) I loved the dream sequence. Very well written and though-provoking. Can't wait to read the next chapter!

This is good. I can't, don't and won't tolerate predjudice. I like where you're going with this. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Gah! I don't believe you! You just end it right _there_!!! -.- the white dude is one of the dude's that beat him up, isn't he. grrr...

grr...evil racists...grrr >

Poor Warrick. He had to go through so much...*sniff* Very well written.

Heh, figures Gris would know. He's such a nerd. I love 'im, but he's still a nerd.

Aww...poor Warrick...*sniff*

Grrr....racism....grrr...*eyes narrow angrily and mutters darkly about racists*

Hey girl, do not get discouraged by lack of reviews. I think that this story is awesome and that you should keep up the great work!
I like the change in POV in teh fourth chapter - very cool! Plus, it is nice for someone to take risks with such a touchy subject. I think you are handling it in a classy way, and I for one cannot wait until your next update.
Keep it coming! :-)

I enjoyed this piece. It was different, in a good way. Another chapter?

Good premise for a tough subject. Looking forward to more of the story.

Interesting and very daring subject. Good idea and I am a G/S shipper so maybe a hint of them in this fic?? And don't give up cause not many people give feedback. I like it so please go on!!
Geena