nice fanfic liked it )

If you don't want flames, then you shouldn't flame other people. Also, how old are you? Because your spelling and grammer is worse than a three year old. Anyways, thanks for letting me be honest!

Oh yeah, my story is just HORRIBLE compaired to this.

Sorry but this fic SUCKS.
What about that stuff in chap 4?and Cedric?
You move too fast and Ron,Fleur,Krum,and Hermione in the prefect bathroom?SO NOT!Sorry but your spelling needs help too.I wouldnt flame cause I dont like to but I couldnt help it.And Cho and Harry wouldnt move that fast and theyre only like 16 and 17.They cant do that *Thing* till theyre married and stuff I mean they are not S-E-X brainwashed students!

This is definitely not one of the good stories I've read.

1. Bad cliffhangers.

2. Bad spelling/grammar/sentence structure/paragraph structure/puncuation.

3. Bad plot.

4. Bad description.

You're not a good writor. Stick to the ABC's, loser.

I COULD'VE said that. I planned to. But instead, here's some advice:

1. If you like Cho/Harry fics and you'd like to write one, WRITE ONE THAT'S INSIDE A PLOT, and NOT, absolutely NOT base the entire thing on the romance.

2. Spell check, check, check, check.

3. Buy the Webster's Student Handbook - Writing Skills book. YOU NEED IT.

Ok, so that was some flaming.

Sorry. But I also do not believe that your anger at those who did flame (they had good reasons to do it) is appropriate.

Ever heard of, "Listen to your enemies. They tell you your flaws"?

That SO applies to you because, frankly, you have a lot of them.

Ta-Ta!

(Email me and be mean. It's amusing.)

Very,uh, different. I mean I don't mind your writing styl, but why the sudden change from chap 1-5 to 6?

Hmmm, I've never seen a Cho/Harry one before... pretty good!

Damn thaT WAS GOOD!

good fic a little confuseing but good

is the hat going to move her

why is that chapter called draco and hermonie

wonderful i think i can finish that sentence for you

pretty good story

is cedric dead, i didnt quite get that part