Aw that so sad! Luckly the JLU episode shows Bruce alive and kickin'!

That was so awesome!
keep it up!

Wow. That's all I can say. Wow. I've read them all, and I think you've done a MAGNIFICENT job of capturing the relationship between Terry and everyone else in the series. I love the fact that you've written it from a first-person point of view. It reveals a lot about Terry himself, and, since you've managed to recreate him perfectly, it feels like I'm watching an episode of the show. What an awesome read! Please, keep it up!

i really liked this story. okay, i know i'm a little late on the whole 'read the story' thing, but i just recently found this site. i'm ganna read the other parts now for sure. if they're anything like part one, they're ganna rule beyond comparison. ;) l8trz!

Was it natural causes or suicide? Given the old mans parting words I'd opt for suicide. Wayen, I think, was the type of man who lived as he chose and chose to die on his own terms.

Things are definantly getting interesting. You're definantly (sp?) showing the love/hate releationship between Terry and Wayne.

Classic, absolutely classic. That was a supurb comeback Lydia was beutifully timed and executed.

Ok, at this point homicide is starting to sound more and more like a viable option.

What will the future bring?

Whoa. I can't believe you just DID that. Did WHAT, you ask?

Well...quite honestly, I don't know where to start. So I guess the whole fic is 'that.'

And it's great. Lydia's one heck of an original character (she looks like the kind who writes herself) and you had the courage to take on some really difficult stuff and the skill to pull it off well. Please tell me you're going to do the world a favor and write professionally. :)

Mazing MAZING MAZING MAZING MAZING! that was FANTATIC. i loved EVERY SINGLE LITTLE ASPECT OF IT. WOW!
im going to go read the next part... *dances*

This is really good I like the way it's written not to mention it's addictiveness. As for Lydia, it's scary how much she resembles my own character from my current bat fanfic. I base most of my characters on myself though, and my b/f just reminded me of how I'm the typical "**-who-doesn't-give-a-**-and-wont-hesitate-to-defend-herself" lol *shrugs a bit* Oh well, I suppose I'll have to go back and spice up my character some. So yea I guess you could call this story inspiring..it makes me escape my laziness to fix up my own story. Anywho..it's good and keep up the good work ^.^

Everyone says you're a good writer i would like to see that talent put into a terry/max fic

Wow. That's all I can say. WOW. I read this straight through. The blunt style, the sweeping changes in this guy's life, the death, the girl, the impending birth ... what an incredible job. When I get some more time I'll read Part 2. :)

You are *such* a fantastic writer! I nearly had to go running for a box of tissues reading the last few chapters.

You should try writing a sequel, really. I'd love to see Terry take charge of those moronic board members!

~Gryphon Gal

This was really good! I'm glad that FF.N did that review history thing, because it gave me the chance to come back to this story! Good job!!!