It good, annoyingly short buy good none the less. It's Very rare to fine another apprentice of Sabrina's. Post more soon.

hmm... kool. i thought that was really good. i'm now gonna go ahead and read the rest of your stuff. if i don't have enough time today, i will eventuallly, but that was really good! i like

I have to admit that this is a little snot of a chapter but it is intriguing. Please write more chapters...longer chapters.

~*~The Duke of Briarcliffe

I want to see him meet Ash and his friends after Ash wins the Johto League or somewhere in Johto.