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BrianBach5 8/2/09 . chapter 1
Very nice ending (or, hopefully, extra chapter) to this saga. I like that you let Gary find someone who could share his 'paper life'. I wish that they had gone this far in the series but suspect that they didn't want to marry Gary off for fear of losing the female viewers.

Especially like the ending with Gary and Milton meeting and realizing that they both get tomorrows paper, just different cities. Hope that you write a fourth chapter to cover that angle and wrap up the relationship for Gary and Sarah (ie proposal and wedding and such, maybe even having kids and passing on the legacy. But that would require several more chapters... I can wish, right !
Victory-Starr 3/14/06 . chapter 1
Thank you so much! You're a great writer!
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