Well, hell yeah! They're all gonna die! Mwahahaha!
*ahem* Sugar late at night... doesn't mix very well. Heh heh ^_~
The quotes were put in here well. *nods in agreement with self*
You're a mercenary (sp), right? So how come you're throwing up so much? Ahh, those butterflies... I told you not to eat the big colorful ones! "They're bad!" I said. But noooooooooo... "Ah, I'll be fine. Besides, what could happen?" You'll get sick, that's what!

And damn you with this cliffhanger!

P.S. Remember, staring at blue makes you stupid! It's either red, yellow, or orange that makes you smarter.
!!!!!!!!MATSCHIG!!!!!!!!!!

HeyaZ, I'm at school and in a better state of mind than I was yesterday (meaning I can give a [hopefuly] better review). So! Let's see...

I like the idea of telling what's going on by your journal. And I know I can be a *** (I don't know if the school has a language blacoker or something) to deal with. >8P Roaming around, looking for trouble... That's me. ^_^ My attitude to all those people was probably amusement and so I left for awhile to stop lauging.

You still haven't really explained why the army is coming, are you going to do that in a later chapter? Don't leave me hanging! I wanna know what's going on there.

So are you going to be the commander of their *ahem* 'army'? I almost feel sorry for Geo. Almost.

Update soon, ya hear?

SQUISHY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 8D

Hell yeah! Nice job! And all those other good things I can't think of cos I'm so damn wired. ^_^
Accurate yet brief description of me. 8P
Continue soon or I'll hurt you bad!

...I thought Sierra was a unicorn. Anyways... It seems like a pairing between Ihrie and Larc (I know I'm wrong, but still a thought I had) may be possible here.
*raises a brow* And what's going on with the soldiers? An interesting twist to the story, but who/what are they? Ahh! The suspense! Write more and I'm sorry I didn't review sooner!

Very interesting. I like these fics where things are going as they should and suddenly BOOM! and it all hits the fan. Ha ha, very nice!

*** head to the side in surprise* *realizes she was most likely wrong (and is almost positive she is) about the "Ranger" being Larc* :D
Anyways... You are good at this. I recommend you to continue writing this fic 'cos I'm interested (even though I haven't seen Larc, and if I think he's in a fic that's usually the reason I read fics) in what's gonna happen next. Thanks for reviewing my fic too, I'm finally getting off my lazy ** and writing it.
So... Please continue this fic or else I'll...I'll...err... Stop reading this fic!!! (I won't, but it was worth a shot ^_~ )

Thanks for reviewing my story! I'm loving this story more and more so please continue!!!

Good so far, continue this please!

one helluva a cliffhanger,but the story is pretty friggin' kewl!

COOOOOL!!!! Very nice...me like. Hey, bring in the next chapter, please. I wanna see it! *Begins to e-mail all her friends, then she remembers that she is on FanFiction.net, not Yahoo Mail*

If you don't continue this, it'll be worthless. Real promising though.

Cool!!

*mouth agape* ooooooooo...... more..... *zombie-like nodding*

Woooow... Nice start, at least. I've got a few quibbles, though: first of all, I don't know whether this is deliberate or not (and don't e-mail to me complaining about this comment if it is deliberate -- I've had that happen before, and it'd kind of annoying), but you keep switching between past and present tense. It's kind of a minor point compared to the story but it does disrupt the flow a lot. Also, I've gotta ask -- why is DOMINIA capitalized? Just seemed kinda odd is all. Other than that it seems pretty interesting, and I hope you continue.

^_^ Very cool!