aww nice story ^^

Hi! Your story is pretty good, and I like the plot, great idea1
I do, however, think it feels a little rushed sometimes, and the first chapters are really short... And the breaking up between Squall and Rinoa sounds a bit too... rash. It just doesn't feel like the way Squall would do it... get what I mean?
Besides that, and the fact that sometimes Zell says some Selphie things and the other way around, it's a great story and I hope you post soon... :)
kiss*

I don't usally enjoy romence but that was very interseting. Also is there an other chapter coming soon?

Oh.. is the girl Quistis? Unless she's a new added character hehe

I can't remember myself leaving all those crazy reviews but apparently, I did lol. Well same as always, loved the updates =) Thanks for reviewing mine too.

Now that I think about, the intro is kind of similar lol except mine's in more of a horrifying way. But anyways, keep updating!

That was a sweet chapter... when do you skip to the romance?

This is cool!

i love it! its so sweet and i hope you update soon!

that was intresting, no body ever makes Squall cry in their fic's too bad Zell had to make such a big deal about it... Squall's looking for Quistis huh! I hope this will be a quall

hey! its me again! ^_^ haven't been on FF.Net for a while and I just happened to glance over at your update!

Very interesting chapter! Squall crying? Now thats something you dont see everyday! ^^ Keep up the good work!!

O_O_O_O_O_O_O_O_O_O_O_O u never told me this was going to have Irvine and Rinoa!!! O_O

continue soon!
p.s. sorry for reviewing so late, didn't have a chance to check a ff.net for a whole week ^^;;

O.O!!! i abosutely LUVED this chapter!!!!!! omg... squall hates rinoa? since wen did the world started agreeing wit me n not the other way around? lol jus kiddin!

please write more sooon!!! this is soo interesting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i really liked your story, it left me guessing.

WHHEEEEEE!! I loved this chapter!!!! MUST UPDATE!!!!!! blonde hair gurl? hmm.... sounds reelie intriguing n interesting! ^_~ PLZ UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!! o_O n y was squall half naked? y didn't he wear his shirt? VISUAL ABUSE! ^_^;;; anywho update sooon!!!

AWWW come on! that was way too short!! I must read more!!!!!!!!!! This is a wonderful start and the story sounds very mysterious and intriguing... =) Please continue and write more!!!!!!!!!!! ^0^