Fred is such a jerk.

Soo sad, but in a good way. Would be fun if u did your own take on the movie too, perhapes get Fred and Welma back together. Anyway, me like this. ^.~

Oh, man. Freddie Jones isn't just in hot water, he's aslo in hot oil!

Signed
Dr. Thinker.

Liked it, loved it, these things all come to mind when I read your stories. Please continue your excelent work and I hope to see another good SD fic from you soon.

wow that was really good, i like the way it had the movie go into it.

Sorry, but I don't like the Fred and Velma couple thing. They will never be a couple! Velma is just too nerdy and weird.

DUDE!!!! What a cilffhangar. (I know, I'm making a big deal out of nothing and you think I'm crazy, but it's OK) Wow, I'm really gonna keep my eye out for the next chapter (and I will cheer when ya do update)very well. Bad Mr. Jones, the poor bastard. Can't wait to see what Velma's gonna do with him once she finds out. Keep up the good work.

Later Dayz

hey,

I like this, i always thought Thelma and Fred had a thing for each other.
Continue soon
C.

Aww, poor Fred; now he's really in over his head. And porr Velms, too. You're doing a great job accounting for the differences between the characters we knew from the cartoon ad the characters we had seen in the movie. Keep it up--I can't wait for the next chapter.

YES! YES YES YES YES YES! This has got to be one of the only Fred/Velma fics in existence. I'm currently working on one myself, though I do believe they're for a certain breed of people. For some reason I just can't SEE Velma with either Ethan or Shaggy. But they DID have something going on in the movie, I swear. There should be a club for this sort of thing. A few supporters are already joining the masses, of course.

The masses will arrive soon. Long live Fred and Velma!
Erika

I dont even like Velma and Fred couple ok i HATE that couple it makes me want to throw up!AND if Fred liked Velma(eww)he wouldn't kissed Daphne at the end!You can say anything u want about me but REMEBER THIS Fred and Velma WILL never be together!!!!Daphne is so wicked have u seen her fight she can teer that skinny little know-it-all-Jenkins up.FRED AND DAPHNE 4 EVER!!!!!!!
I DONT CARE WHAT U SAY OR THE IDIOTS AND B!TCHES WHO ACTURALLY LIKE THIS **!!!!!!!!!!

Wicked! I'm completely for Velma/Fred (rare, those) and I think your story is brilliant! It's really brave of you to stand up to those people like "I don't like velma" and continue the story as you like! If it were me, I'd just continue to make them plain ** off.

Continue!

Cheers,
~Lanti~

To "I Don't Like Velma":

Yes, I removed your latest review, and believe it or not I'm sorry I had to do it. I certainly don't want to begrudge any reviewer the chance to air their opinions, even if I don't share them myself. However, the review was simply too mean-spirited, particularly near the ending and with the "number reference." I don't want that kind of stuff on my review board, sorry.

Also, this board is for reviewing the story, not arguing with other reviewers about what Velma is or isn't. If you don't like the Fred/Vel pairing, that's absolutely fine-- I knew it was a little unconventional when I wrote it. But if it bothers you that much, you don't have to read it.

Looks like ole' Freddy boy won't learn his lesson so easily after all. Nice job on this story. I'm usually a Shaggy/Velma or (after your other story) Ethan/Velma but somehow you make this work. Keep it up.

Message to the anonymous reviewer...keep the sexuality comments to a better place for discussion. She's a CARTOON CHARACTER, for crying out loud; they don't have sexual identities. If you don't have anything constructive to say about the story, then don't say it.