That was a really good story with Trunks and Goten. I loved it! It's really original and I love how Trunks and Goten end up maturing.

Interesting and fitting take on the boys. Its an original plot and the characterization is well written. Great job. Too bad you decided to retire from writing. This is one of the best portraie of young Truck and Goten. Take care and god bless.

one word...WOW!

EYYA _ I LIKE I LIKE I LIKE _ SO COLL YEH!

I had read this fic before on a different site. Velvet Unfolding, I think. This is one of my favorite Chibi Trunks and Goten fics, few others can capture their powerful bond without going off into complete and utter Yaoi as you can. Kudos to you for such a great work, I love it! I wasn't aware you had written more, I enjoy your style so I'm off you read some more of your stuff.
-Yonk

Excellent, as usual. I've come to expect nothing less than near perfection from your work.

Excellent!

Nice work! Now, I'm off to read the other story that this was a prequel to!

WONDERFUL!

Being a die hard Truten fan, I absolutely adore fics that confirm that the two were destined to be together from the time that they were chibis. This fic has an entirely original slant on how and why they became bonded, moreso than just the "it happened when we fused" story line. Absolutely beautifully written, well thought out.I just loved it!

You write the best fics! I loved this one. I don't read a whole lot about Chibi-Trunks and Goten and this one rocked!

Very cool. Interesting and different! I liked it a lot. (And I liked the end, so sweet!) Well, that's all I gotta say for now, so ja!

Your fic is a wonderful read. I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.

this was a very good fic

Good job! I really like how you mangaged to make the meeting with the high elders a *lot* more realistic. It really affected me more now than when I beta'd it!

_; *huggles* It looks great, dear! *hee* I'm on reviewing mission lately. Read and review EVERYTHING! *coughs* Course, I'm back on instead of on efanfiction, because efanfiction is down for the moment. _ I know it feels a bit better when someone reviews, no matter what it is sometimes...

Okay, enough blabbering.

Did I mention when I beta'd that I adore this story? _: It's positively amazing! I will soon be reading "No One Like You" here soon! _ When I get another spare moment of course!