There's nothing like a good Jesse / Emma fanfic to make you cry. Well done :)

its good but the 13 chap. was like kinda cheesy... i mean... that was wAyy too easy... the found the cure so fast and all... and so much i love you blah blah... no offense its still a great story lol so yeah. k well keep up the good work :D bren/shal jess/emma all the way!

Oh, this was perfect! I think I am going to cry. Thanx for the story, abeep.

Whew! I'm happy again.

Oh, you almost got me crying. This is good and sad and everything else. Emma had better make it!

OH MY GOODNESS! HE DID IT! IT WAS HIM! And he didn't even know...

Okay, what's happening? She knows him? This is crazy! Oh! I've got to read on.

oh, this is good! I love you!
(oh, by the way, I love the Shal/Bren interaction too)

WHAT'S GOING ON HERE? Oh, you're worse than my sister at suspense. It's not fair.

Oh, you know how to really let you feel the characters. I've rarely seen this type of characterization and polish. This is GOOD.

oh! This is so good! And you better let Emma be okay!

The characterization is excellent, the few punctuation errors did not detract from the story (though you may want to hunt them up), the story just got WAY too suspenseful (ooh!), and I'm hanging on for the ride and loving it!

Oh man, this is SO good! I'm going to the next chapter now.

This is good but totally unfair. Sniff, sniffle, sniff.

That was great! Keep it up girl!