DarkJackel 2008-09-12 . chapter 27Great to see more of this fic. The fight between Usa and Usagi was nice and seeing the fate of Rei was also well done. Hopefully this will help bring everone together. Giving Usa the Mark of Chaos Accendant was a suprise. What did she do to earn Khorne's favor though?
Looking forward to seeing the results of Bile's experiments and the fate of everyone else as this story progresses.
-_-Me-_- |
phoenix.ru 2008-09-03 . chapter 27^_^ it's alive!
Still, a number of grammar mistakes spoil the enjoyment a bit.. but the story still rocks!
Hope your muse won't leave you ) |
snoopycool 2008-09-03 . chapter 27thank god you update this! i thought you were going to leave this fic unfinish.
i really enjoy reading this fanfic so kept up the good work |
Anon. Critique 2008-09-02 . chapter 1 I would like to point out that Saffron was a real God, but the ritual that was to bring him back to full power was interrupted by Ranma when he cut the Phoenix Tap in half and it fell onto Saffron's egg, causing it to hatch prematurely; so when Ranma fought against Saffron, Saffron was fighting at less than 1/10 of his full power as the ritual was supposed to last for three more days before Saffron hatched. |
RanmaChaos 2008-09-02 . chapter 27Great chapter!Please continue to UPDATE!! |
Lysander45 2008-09-02 . chapter 27There are few times when I am genuinely surprised, but the appearance of this new chapter was one of those times. This tale has been dormant for some time, so long I had believed you had given up on it. But this comeback proved that belief wrong, and rightly so! This is a brilliant story, so elegant in its weaving of several separate universes that it defies belief! Well done sir!
All I can say is keep up the great work, and I hope you can rustle up a chapter sooner.
Now comes the second part of my review. I am myself an immense fan of the 40K universe and all Games Workshop products in general. I have a 20 point strong army of Alpha Legion space marines, and pride myself on keeping up to date with all new codex's and so on. So if you need any help with information, I offer my services to you. |
Jerry Unipeg 2008-09-02 . chapter 27GREAT CHAPTER! (*x4) Well done with each person. |
mythicalprogrammer 2008-09-01 . chapter 1Wow, the intro was pretty good like a discovery's channel space show with kewl narrative. I like how you explained how Ranma got his power up in the author notes and all. Usually it annoy the crap out of me when some just give Ranma freebie. |
Truce 2007-12-26 . chapter 23 I've read this thing about 3 times, over the years, as more chapters get added. I'll be frank, a lot of little annoyances make it hard to read, and nobody's gonna mistake this for professional writing, BUT it's got great content, mostly the Warhammer 40K stuff. I don't really find the Ranma bits too well written, and the Sailormoon stuff really rubs me the wrong way (don't blame me, I'm spoiled by stuff like On A Clear Day You Can See Forever).
I do hope you keep writing though, we don't get many lengthy W40K tie-ins, and FWIW I think your W40K stuff is pretty damn good, content-wise. |
Lysander45 2007-11-06 . chapter 1This is a great fic, so why haven't you updated in so long. Please, please do something about this one at least, its the only decent 40K crossover I can find |
bd 2007-02-15 . chapter 26 i love this fic i gust got into warhmmaer 40k be eating up the book like crazey ready 6 so far. i love if you can update this soon as you can. |
Bomber Man 2007-01-30 . chapter 11 umm...
i thought the legion of the damned was the fire hawks chapter who were traped in ta warp...
i may be wrong but... |
God of crossovers 2007-01-20 . chapter 26 Update plz! Or i will have to wait longer! In the name of all that is holy update! |
The happy face of doom! 2006-12-30 . chapter 26 Good story I hope you update! Update now!!
From The happy face of doom |
I am the Bane of my Sword 2006-11-18 . chapter 26Eh. This is getting confusing... there's alot of different sides... |