-Oi, I just don't quite know what to say here... Meh, we'll go for the blunt and honest approach. I love the second half of the story. I don't like the first part -- although I might flip through again and change my mind.
-Then, there's a load of events you tossed in that had heaven high potential to screw over. But, you pulled through and gave the characters an edge of life they seemed to lack at the start as a result.
-This story isn't exactly recent, so you could've noticed this, but repeating words or actions can add emotion but they can also detract, even ruin events. Here (ch20), we have Bleu tacked with the same verb almost every time the focus drifts to her (asked). After the first usage, the reader already has the picture, giving the author a gap to play with expressions. Also, the skim descriptions could've been better.
-A little more on the Guardians would've been really nice... What you have isn't bad at all. It's just the whole box of what they are was a tad foggy and I still have only a blurred idea of what those things look like. More Shax, too...
-Overall, the better moments outweigh the rough by far. Bleu's character was flat off beautiful, especially her relationships (Nina2, Myria, and Ryu1).
-Oi, this is long. I was just thinking as an after thought 'bout a note you left on fear of Ryu/Katt love. Fans who support that pairing and can write are already difficult to find. So many Ryu/Nina lovers... Heh, I dare you to find more than one of my fav! Ray/Nina (still second game)

It's finished. O_O Wow... I loved this story. It was great. I hope you write more BoF fics. Great job. :)
I loved the ending espcially. ^^
(p.s. yay! I was able to send a review finally!)

I have to say, excellent story and excellent ending. I like how you've connected the BOF games together. I'm looking forward to seeing your next stories!

Hmm, very odd, though how Rei ends up in the future is beyond me.
Though what the hell is deathevans next move. Oh well, another question for another day.
Anyhow, my next chapter is up, so read and review it.

Excellent. Execellent execellent story. It's been almsot a year and a half in the making, but in the end it has all come together to produce a flushed-out, beautiful fanfiction. The epilogue I felt was very fitting, especially the very last part with the wanderer, and I definitly like how you tie everything together with future BOFs. The characters were portrayed well thorughout. Katt, Nina, Sten, Bleu... we as readers came to really understand and care about them. You did an execellent job.
Man, this has almost inspired me to work on my own BOF fanfiction. It's about time I got off my ** and updated that thing. Good job. I'm really looking forward to your future works.

Well, its epilogue-tastic. Not much to really say except I'm anxious to see what happens next. And the thing I'm most anticipating is the fixation with souls. Not that its a bad thing but I'm just a little curious.

ack, sorry, sorry, so so so sorry for not replying.
very good ending, i love the way every one was prtrayed, and the way things have happened through out the story, i was amazed at how philosphical you were able to make the guardians, almost exactly like they are in the game, congrats and have you considered becoming a writer? you should, you have a great insight to imaginiation and the english language .

I take it that Daigan is the elder you fight in BoF3 for the infinity gene, and their children and Rei, Ryu and Teepo from the same game then.
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Nicely done, run through and everything!
Apparently there's still more with the figure searching through the rubble in particualr.
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I'm not too sure if i can remember exactly about Gaist mentioning when his doubts about his goddess started, but here's a good a time as any I guess.
One thing I'd like to see is the part when Gaist and Garr got into an argument, I presume, over the brood and parted ways.
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Once again, great job!

^__^ Your very welcome!
>__< I can't wait till the other two stories coem out.
Well, I'm not sad anymore, that this story ended, The news about making another story takes it's plac with exictment (Did that make sense? I bet not huh. LOL). and not just one TWO!
>__<
Well, this was an awesome chapter! er...epologue...^__^;; Anyway, Awesome Story!

AWESOME CHAPTER!
*Sob* I feel sorry for the wanderer. I was crying throughout the whole thing. Yua and Daigan didn't get together? O.O Wow. Shocker.
This was a sad chapter. I cried through most of it. -__-
I have nothing else to say, execpt this was yet another chapter, and I'm even more sad that this story is ending. -__-

Nicely done, a very good chapter. On a side note, I agree with you about the Breath of Fire 2 Dragon summonings. Great chapter.

Possibly the better of any, and the huge battle seems to resemble alot, but deathevans transformation to a huge beast also reminds me of something recent in a videogame.
The battle is was the best i have seen though.

Hello!
I'm home sick, but I couldn't resist on reading on. ^_^
The elder died! Whoa! I feel sorry for him, and I really feel sorry for Draigan. Seeing his on father die right in front of his face!! >.< I feel so sorry for him!!
*shudder* Shax looked creepy. The way you described him! *shudder* creepy.
[ "Zombies..." He muttered, frustrated. "Why did it have to be Zombies? I HATE zombies." ]
SO funny! Halarious! LOL!
Nina kicked A** >.< but she fainted. Oh well, at least she diposed of the body. LOL!
The wanderer was awesome!! In combat with DeathEvan! they were awesome!
*crying* the wanderer died! ~^0^~ He was my second favroite character!! wha.
Okay, what is Gaist going to do! oh, I can't wait till the next chapter! >.< Please update soon! I'm going to die in worrines. (Did that even make since? LOL)
Awesome job on the chapter. and it was the longest one too! >.

Hey, just letting you know that I'm still reading! I just have to make time now to keep up with my friends' work...ahggh stupid work and life... Keep it up!

I liked this chapter, it was long and it also kept my interest. There weren't any problems I noticed about grammar or anything like that so that was cool. That's it really. Can't wait to see what happens next.