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| NaTsUkO-ChAn 2006-04-11 ch 1,  | abuseOuch... real angst... It's so sad... but yet so sweet^^ |
| bakadesu 2004-07-14 ch 1, anon. | abusewell, this story was all right. except that the japanese was really painful to read some places. is "arigatou" really that much superior to "thank you"? your story has great potential, but please pick one language. :) |
| Carter Tachikawa-not logged... 2004-04-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseA very nice Yami no Matsuei. I like your one-shots, they are so cute and you write the characters well. Another good story. Keep writing. ~CT |
| Anna Sartin 2003-08-10 ch 1, | abuseThis was very good, and deserving of a sequel! I hope you'll consider writing one someday, I'd love to know what happened the next morning... This was so sweet, and everyone was in character, and... I just loved it! ^_^ |
| Nekochan 2003-07-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseIn character, very very beautiful.I'm really really touched by your writing. I hope that you will post more of your work in the future. *thumbs up* |
| bitter shard 2003-07-07 ch 1, | abuseI think I have become addicted to your writing. This was so sweet. And I love this song *starts singing* *watches as surrounding people run away, covering their ears* -_-' |
| Raven Layne 2003-06-22 ch 1, | abuseSuch sweetness!! Yet another beautifully written fic!! I'll admit I was looking forward to some smoochiness, but it ended so sweetly that I'll let it go this time. ~laughs~ Wonderful job, I really hope you write more YnM fics in the future. Your characterizations are excellent! |
| Kitty 2003-06-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseWonderful piece of work. The characters are written wonderfully,with a nice mix of sap and angst. What I like most is that the characters are not OOC, and I really love reading it :-) Hope to see more of your work! :D |
| Ita-chan 2002-12-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseSSSSSOOOOOOOOO SWWEEEETTTTTT,...!!^_~!! |
| yamatoforever 2002-12-16 ch 1, | abuseIt's a very good story. I really love it! Good job in describing all characters, especially Hisoka. I hope I will see your other work in FFNet soon. |
| AutumnPunkAngel 2002-11-29 ch 1, | abusehmmm. i'd like to see a sequel to this ^_^ cute fic |
| icediamond 2002-11-19 ch 1, | abuseGreat fic. You have a nice writing style - not too sparse, not too wordy. I enjoyed your characterization of Hisoka. Especially since I've been struggling with writing him for a week now, but that's a separate issue. My only suggestion would be to add some notes at the end to bring your word count up past 5000, as you're so close anyways, but that's a purely marketing technique. *shrugs* Happy writing! |
| kiken na Kirua 2002-11-13 ch 1, | abuse^_^ me likes alot of course, it IS Tsu+His YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY! WAIWAIWAI WAI-Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz *V* |
| Gnine 2002-11-12 ch 1, | abuseMEEP! Sooooo cute! I loved it! |
| B-chan 2002-11-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseOOoh... Great story! Too bad there wasn't a really really romantic ending to it. ^^ Oh well. If it did, it would be cliche. Congrats! ME LOVES IT!!!!!!! Sorry. I'm in a hyper/hentai mood. Btw, his pants? *laugh* Sorry. Ja~ |