this is such a good love story!!i love it!and just like a good story,it plays a movie in ur head.ash is so cute!

I love it i dont know if you think this is the end but i say keep going!

*sets fire to whrighter* ASH DOSNT LIKE MAY! she likes him but he loves misty brenden likes may not ash!!

damn, talk about TOTALLY OOC! like, only Jessie was right. sigh But i guess thats u 4 me... always changing things that are good. lol

James did something right for once.Col!And I love Ash/May!I've never read any fic like it!It was totally AWSOME!Can't wait for your next fic.'Til then.

Sayonara,
Yume-chan

I absolutaly loved it! It had a near perfect layout.

AWSOME story yah got here I love it Please wright the next one

The Ash and May story was awesome I read only a few and I'm mad that there isnt very many Ash and May stories around. You are the best! Thanks for making a few Ash and May stories!|
SEE YA LATER!
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This was pretty good! Congrats on a fine fanfic here! You deserve a good prize! Here, catch! *Throws her a Ultra Ball* Open it!

*Out pops a Blissey! It looks at her, squeals, and hugs her*

Her name is Selene, and she is very well-trained. I hope you take good care of her!

Please make more fanfics like this! Keep it up!

This was quite good, though it almost seems that there should be a chapter before this, but there doesn't seem to be. As it starts out is quite good, but in the middle it seemed that there should have been some sort of warning. But, I probably just didn't expect anything like this to happen.

Wow, interesting concept of James getting them together. Nice story, I hope Ash is better by now.