MAY IS 10! YOU DON'T WANT 10 year old Girls Kissing an 14 year old boy!

*shakes head* Pokeshipping is the only safe one..

>:( i hate flaming, but YOU sir, SUCK!
Ash loves only Misty! may should
jump off a cliff because she is dumb.
Now, if you were to change all of may's
parts to Misty, it would be better. But
seeing how you would HAVE to be an
idiot to like may and Ash in the first
place, you are probably too dumb to
change!!

Nice story! I wonder whats going to happen next in the story?
WELL TI'LL THEN
SEE YA LATER!
^_-

All right, this is a strange one. I think that if you keep on writing, the story will get better. Don't worry, I like the fic.