Wow!! This is a wonderful story! I loved it!

Good. Ciao

this was a splendid story, and the characters were portrayed perfectly. i'm in love with it now!

An interesting story. The ending is a little uprupt and unclear. I thought the ending was the last thought of Kigiku and it didn't immediately follow that it was actually a memory.

Also how did she know what befel her sister, how did she know her sister did not remain in the field where she had last seen her?

Good story none the less.

~QueenTatooine

I absolutely adore the breaking of the spell. I guess it's a good thing for them that you seem to have the clean verson of the story of Sleeping Beauty to work from instead of the original. Heh. I think Sango would let Miroku rot first.

You did an excellent job of weaving in the elements from both Western and Eastern fairy tales while keeping every thing within cannon.

beautiful and creepy. I loved it! And your writing was excellent! I was totally drawn in and I loved the tone. You write beautifully, the prose was just wonderful!

Kinda boring, but enought to spike my interest (old history, old English and that kinda stuff) I'M SO HAPPY THERE'S SO MANY CHAPTERS! *squeal* I can't wait!

And I have to say, I am writin an Inuyasha fanfic, and it's creepy- I had an idea REALLY close to yours! It was where (it's kinda confusing-the storyline for my fanfic) Inuyasha was heading to give Kagome and the gang a surprise but were cut short because of this random castle that (scarily) was being watched by Naraku. I'M SCARED!

I won't use that now, though, seeing as it's practically copying you. Shows how much I love your writing--before I loved it! *sweatdrop*

Creepy...I'm gonna go read your fic now.

This has WAY too little reviews for such a great story! I personally love old history (y'know, medevil times, warlocks, Merlin, magicians, Grimm, dragons, King Arthur...) so this is my kinda story! I have to say, though, some of your quotes from books are baffling me a little- I really wanna read those now!

For the Inuyasha part, it's pretty good..

Ahhw, cutest ficlet EVER! Ranks 11 out of 10 in my book ^_^ Keep up your fantabulous talents in writing, ne? Positively mouthwatering and pleasant to read ^_~

Beautifully written! You kept everyone in character while still developing their relationships. Nicely done. You have a wonderfully creative mind! I can't wait to read more of your writing!

Queen,

This was such a beautifully written story! I'm seriously in awe of your ability to paint a picture with words. I also like the way you include short poems or quotes at the beginning of your chapters, it adds a lot to the mood of the story.

Now Sango saving Miroku in true 'princess of shining armour' tradition is one good shot. I do beleive, madame, that you are great. :D You've woven all the folk tales very well together, and that merits all the praise it can get. ..
...Even though princesses don't usually have evil incarnations made with clay from a witch roaming the earth and trying to steal the knight from her... (don't try saying that out loud without breathing..) :P I guess Takahashi gets to be a modernist too, if you consider that :P

very nice! wonderfully done! superb ideas! lol, loved the Sango x Miroku waffiness...tho I'd be happier if there was more ^.^v
I'm not stopping till i read all your Inu-ficcies, they're flippin awesome!!
~NoodLeZ

Have to go, really wanna read. Reviewing so i know where to come back later!

This was a great story. Hmm...not so much because of the drama, but the weaving of the fairy tales and the mysterious. Its...I don't know...kinda like the spell of the Secret Garden (figurative)...the weaving of the past and the present...and...I'm sorry, I'm just not good at explaining. It's kinda like nostalgia: the goodness in looking back to your childhood. This story was more the beauty of a old silver ring on worn velvet in a cool, dark room, compared to the common obviousness of a shining, golden brooch on shiny silk in a shaft of a noonday sun. Am I making any sense? Do I even understand what I'm saying? Sorry for my blabbering, but I felt I had to express how the story affected me somehow, even if I have no language skills and can't convey it adequately. Thank you for sharing your story. It was fantastic.