Great characterization. Romantic without being fluffy. Loved it.

This was great, because Vaughn WOULD notice the ring was gone, and we SHOULD have gotten to see it on the show! :) The POV approach you took was interesting, and really good for this scene. And you did Vaughn's voice really well. I could hear him saying the lines.

Heya ;) Feedbacking.

Yes, I too would have liked to see the whole There's No Ring! thing addressed on the show (I'm too much of a shipper), and I liked this piece because of that. That, and the fact that I'm a psychopath shipper who will read anything S/V related. Well, almost.

Nice work, sweetie :)

Really lovely writing. Some absolutely evocative phrases, and a nice sense of mood. It had a sense of expectancy and ... fullness. I would've liked to see the show address Vaughn noticing that Sydney had taken her ring off.

Well, for this lovely piece I will forgive you for the wait for adagio! You realize, however, that it just makes me want adagio part 3 even more, don't you?

Favourite line: "if you listen hard enough, she can tell you everything within the breath of her sigh." Thank you for getting inside Vaughn's head and making him say the things I want him to!
Now, back to adagio, puh-leaz!!

I love what you've done here!! Vaughn's so sweet and all. Is there more?? Cause I can't wait!

Nicely written. I like how you do Vaughn (heh heh...)

I'm looking forward to reading more and more of your work.

Favourite lines:
"You notice everything don't you?"

The comment and the smile floor you, almost, and your next words trip all over each other, "It's my job."

Excelent Syd/Vaughn charactorization!

*happy sigh* Ah, the joys of Vaughn's mind. Good job of getting into his thoughts. Please write more soon - you have a fun writing style!

Bulletproof,
This is a great story. I love how you used Sydney's ring as the turning point - it was clever because Vaughn was the one thinking about it, not Sydney. I think this story is so different from other S/V ones because it was so realistic, but you added another level of depth to make it a great story. Your portrayal of emotions was very sweet. I really enjoyed this!
-Shade

I am just going to clap now. And sigh, with contentment, but mostly just clap.

love it, bulletproof. just a nice piece. thanks. :)