Warrior from beyond 2005-04-26 . chapter 1LOL that is sweet too and the last part is funny. Bulma would have to be pretty mad to belive that Goku would say such things about Vegeta though. That is a good story. |
jameslover 2003-05-21 . chapter 1 hey that was beautiful!
xx me |
Rissa of the Saiya-Jin 2003-02-18 . chapter 1*nod nod* Yes, Veggie is indeed gorgeous.
Vegeta: *preens* Aren't I just, though?
*sweatdrops* .Egotist.
Vegeta: WHAT?! You SAID I was gorgeous!!
.Keep writin'! |
LaTiNa-CiNnA 2002-11-24 . chapter 1Wow! How romantic! I really like this poem ^-^ |
SerenityZero 2002-11-12 . chapter 1awww :P |
Mara Kraus 2002-11-12 . chapter 1coolies I got first review! Love the ending. |
soyamiso 2002-11-12 . chapter 1That's another good poem. |