swordbunny4486 2008-10-13 . chapter 21wow!
:D love it |
Nameless 2008-09-30 . chapter 21 the end. THE END!
The point of life is to succeed through difficulties. I mean, to me, the prospect of living forever? BOR-ing. Everything would get old, wouldn't it? So why the end. It's not always sunshine. Rainy days, stormy weather, but you can always get through it. And after you get through it, that's when it counts the most.
...or you can write fiction happily. Make evils and goods, clash, make the good win. If you want a best-seller, examine great works of literature, moving works of literature, and have the evils win, but the goods still manage, still pull through. (though personally those depress me :))I think doing that, your mind is free and maybe happiness together wouldn't be so bad.
~philosophical thinking from an RR (random reviewer, not rough endoplasmic reticulum!) |
dracosnumber1girl 2008-07-21 . chapter 21so cute! Well, the ending. I really liked the nuances your story had. It was fun to read the story and not really know what was going to happen next. Too often I've read stories that are utterly predictable, but this was NOT! Great job! |
loony 2008-06-11 . chapter 21 YAY!
It's all over!
Not that it was bad, but you have a lot of suspense in it!
I LOVE the Latin! It's so cool how you make your own spells. I used to dream of being a witch and making up spells like Luna Lovegood's mom.
Its also really sweet. Ditty and Winky are hilarious. DOBBY IS MINE!
Haha, I have no constructive criticism, darn. Just praise. How did people know who M.B. was? I was totally thinking, 'Millicent Bullstrode?' until Draco was like, 'That's too obvious!'
Does Hermy ever recover her memory? Yeah, you'll never answer that, but I guess it doesn't matter.
I love fanfics with Draco falling in love, or Blaise falling in love (writers classify him as both girl or guy), or Ginny falling in love, or the Weasley twins. Write lots, you're awesome!
Eek I write too much. :) |
RuBiAx 2008-05-06 . chapter 21i really liked the story! |
Blueberry Babe 2008-04-21 . chapter 21well done good story.. i like your use of latin.. i figure if i ever decided to learn a language it would be latin..i have always like the idea of it.. anyway.. your mentions of trips to rome and such remind me of past trips.. sigh.. such a beautiful place, anyway thanks again for the story.. now off to find more.. |
MoonlightShadowOfADarkDream 2008-04-11 . chapter 21That story was great!! I loved it!! But... we didn't see that Ravensclaw girl before!! Did we? How could we possibly guess it was her? That's unfair!!
You're great writer! You wrtite fluff better than you think, and most of the chapters you think are bad are in fact, as great as other. |
moonlighttruths 2008-04-01 . chapter 21nicely done... ive read lots of dr/h sequels that involve memory loss but you have a way with words... |
Raina Darlig 2008-02-25 . chapter 21That was so cute good job!! |
daniellewuu 2007-12-13 . chapter 21I LOVE IT AND THANK YOU FOR THE STORY
both fire and ice and this of course and i love your other stories as well! |
bookworm-bianca 2007-11-22 . chapter 21I really liked the story! Good job! |
Z-L.B. 2007-11-02 . chapter 21That was awesome, Great, STUPENDOUS! And I’m happy the House-Elf-Love-Triangle turned out well. Man, who knew Dobby was such a ladies man!
I got to say I was not seeing the sword thing. Draco killing his dad ,yes, but physically instead of magically, no. It’s kind of poetic in a way. And from the wonderful visual I’m getting from your description of Lucius’s face at the time, he didn’t see it coming either. *smirk* Also, keeps Draco form needing to casting an unforgivable.
*wry grin* I was hoping for something heavy, sharp, and medieval to crash down on his head, but this works just as well.
Wonderful job on both stories. Thank you ever so much for sharing your creative vision with me. Keep up the good work! ~ZLB |
Green-Leafer 2007-10-27 . chapter 21LOVED IT!! |
randompersonwhoneverreviews 2007-08-28 . chapter 21 Yay! Hugs and Chocolate! and a happy ending!
I reviewed twice! :D |
randompersonwhoneverreviews 2007-08-28 . chapter 20 the criticism I can give is that you spelled Snape S-H-A-P-E
RPWNR |