O__O Wow...That was great.
Deep, too.

I love these kinds of storys were Adam reflects on the effect being He-Man has on himself and how people treat him.

Hi!

I love your story, please update soon!

Hi!

I love your story, please update soon!

It's introspective view and depth make this a great fic. Now if only I knew what those words mean...oh well, keep writing!

I watched the original he-man with my kids when it was on in the 80's. and even though I was an adult, I loved the show. I think you hit on Adam's feelings, especially about Teela's and Randor's attitude. I liked this piece alot! think about expanding it into a story.

way cool. Teela would help... if she knew. (hint, hint.)

Wow......

good insight into what Adam may be thinking. Very good coice of words for his thoughts there!

Wow.. that's an impressive piece. I've been watching the new MotU on Cartoon Network lately, and while I never really thought about it, your story really makes sense.

I hope you write more - if not on this, than on other works in the MotU universe, certainly! Keep up the good work

I really like where this went. A new take on the whole reluctant secret super hero thing. I'm new to this section but like the revamp of this cartoon (watched the original years ago) and I have to say I honestly never thought of this situation. It certainly wouldn't have occured to me way back when. This is a great one shot.

Keep Writing!
~gerbil

This is great! I've always wondered what Adam feels like in the guise of He-Man. His own personality is SO different from his counterpart's that it makes sense that He-Man's personality would be a separate power- perhaps it's the combined virtues/traits of those who joined to become the spirit of Greyskull. Great fic and I hope to read more of your stories in the future!

-Dalliann

you so have to wirte another part to this is would make a great series

what would happen if he lost it?

Wow, this was pretty damn good. I expected to see more He-man fics to come out since the cartoon started up, but that has yet ot happen. I guess I can wait till then, especially if good fics like this keep coming out. Good idea, I'd like to see a sequel. Good work!