I really loved that! I really like Ba'ek too! I wish Kisa could have loved him back. *sigh* Anyway, this was great from beginning to end and I love how you put the white dove tatoo in at the end! I'd completely forgotten about it! Great job.

Great story.

Neat story, I really liked it! Can I suggest a follow up story where Jack is training Carter? ;)

Sorry I took forever to finish reading this fic!!

Congrats its realy enjoyable ;)!!

~ Fi

What a wondeful afternoon I've just had!! Thanks for the terrific story. I enjoyed your original characters and thought you pegged Jack really well. I liked the saying goodnight to the stars bit, it was a good reoccuring theme to pull chapters together and to create that link between the two of them. The confusion Sam has as two people in one is great too--that's a had balancing act. I'm really looking forward to reading your sequel now!

extremely well characterisation of Kisa. loved the team dynamics in the last chapter. u wrapped it all up very, very nicely. the contrast between Kisa and Carter was depicted very well and when the others talked about it, it was even better.

umm... for the sequel, i'd just like to let u know that i don't really like the endings where they *finally* get together. i want them both on SG-1, with all their feelings inside them. i.e. just this kinda stories. i hope that you have the same trend of thought and that they won't quit or get hurt or have something happen that'd give them the chance or take it upon themselves to be together in the sequel. no pressure though.

...That was amazing! A brilliant end, to a fantastic piece! Loved all of it and was not disapointed by that ending! By any chance could there be a sequel???

*grins amusedly* (is that even a real word?) Cool story! Really loved the team interaction stuff in this chapter...Love seeing the guys all sweetly protective and vulnerable when the get worried about Sam! Keep up the good work - looking forward to the sequel with much enthusiasim! :)

Wow! I really like this story and I can't wait to read more! ^__^

this is a great story! i have enjoyed reading it and have been glued to my screen LOL thanks for writing and I can't wait to read the last chapter although I always find it a shame when a good story comes to an end.

wow!! can't wait for more.

i really liked this entire story and cant wait for the final installment :)

cool!! not really in a very wordy mood at the moment so my words are really simple. can't wait for the next part! (sorry!)

more! give me more!!

:O!! No no don't stop there!! *wants more* OMG this is good!! And I'm sorry I never reviewed before...I have been reading for a long time and just realised today that I'd never reviewed!! More more!